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Array ( [sid] => 148766 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the sunset can't be harsh [time] => 2009-03-28 09:43:50 [hometext] => its about me losing someone special in my life, i didn't listen to her and i wasn't good to her. i lost her in the end but im sitll waiting for her to forgive me [bodytext] => can you hear me?
i take a stroll
hearing a voice calling your name.
i turned around to see who's calling you
but it turns out to be me whispering you name.
lately its been getting warmer not because i'm happy
but because i'm a shame for what i did to you.
i want to tell you something but tears are streaming
and the loud wave current from the stream is covering the words
i'm trying to say to you
the sun is setting, love couples are excited but i'm here wishing
the sun can brighten up my world like it once did.
you have say it's officaly a good bye but then again
you never say it can't be forgiven.
can't understand why lovers get turn on by the sunset.
all i know is that it doesn't last long.
the sun slowly falls down and i keep trying to chase after it
only because i know that if i don't reach it today i'll eventully chase after it
again tommrow.
i'm not taking the chance cause it's no longer avilable to me.
the moon becomes a night light only because i'm trying to move on. [comments] => 0 [counter] => 142 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Zack [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
the sunset can't be harsh

Contributed by Zack on Saturday, 28th March 2009 @ 09:43:50 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



can you hear me?
i take a stroll
hearing a voice calling your name.
i turned around to see who's calling you
but it turns out to be me whispering you name.
lately its been getting warmer not because i'm happy
but because i'm a shame for what i did to you.
i want to tell you something but tears are streaming
and the loud wave current from the stream is covering the words
i'm trying to say to you
the sun is setting, love couples are excited but i'm here wishing
the sun can brighten up my world like it once did.
you have say it's officaly a good bye but then again
you never say it can't be forgiven.
can't understand why lovers get turn on by the sunset.
all i know is that it doesn't last long.
the sun slowly falls down and i keep trying to chase after it
only because i know that if i don't reach it today i'll eventully chase after it
again tommrow.
i'm not taking the chance cause it's no longer avilable to me.
the moon becomes a night light only because i'm trying to move on.




Copyright © Zack ... [ 2009-03-28 09:43:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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