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Array ( [sid] => 14875 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => personal assistant to doctor hell [time] => 2003-03-25 10:05:00 [hometext] => just a fun little poem i decided to make. [bodytext] => i am a personal assistant for doctor hell.
he's a surgent and he can never fail.
every morning he wakes at six,
it only takes him a little time to fix.

doctor hell is evil and mean,
yet he's grand and supreme.
living in side a mansion he seeks,
into the night, he creeps.

as the moon sits in the dark night,
the clouds creeping into the light,
cackling and screams,
pain and torture is what he brings.

i am a personal assistant for doctor hell.
i was created blonde and pale.
sick of deprivation,
sick of being a creation.

i help him with his things,
i help him cut bloody strings,
i help him no matter what it seems,
i am his personal assistant that screams.

in the night i stare at the stars,
i wish to be free and without these scars...
i am a personal assistant to doctor hell,
i help him out until my body does swell.

he slices,
he dices,
i watch--i stare
hoping, i have no fear.

singing to be free,
to float away and see,
the bright side of day,
to be happy and play.

alone and forever,
scared and moreever,
sad, and crying
trapped and prying.

but i am a personal assistant of doctor hell,
and here i shall remain, slave, to dwell.
scrawled on the floor i cry in this cell,
because i am a personal assistant, to doctor hell.

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personal assistant to doctor hell

Contributed by frozensuicide on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



i am a personal assistant for doctor hell.
he's a surgent and he can never fail.
every morning he wakes at six,
it only takes him a little time to fix.

doctor hell is evil and mean,
yet he's grand and supreme.
living in side a mansion he seeks,
into the night, he creeps.

as the moon sits in the dark night,
the clouds creeping into the light,
cackling and screams,
pain and torture is what he brings.

i am a personal assistant for doctor hell.
i was created blonde and pale.
sick of deprivation,
sick of being a creation.

i help him with his things,
i help him cut bloody strings,
i help him no matter what it seems,
i am his personal assistant that screams.

in the night i stare at the stars,
i wish to be free and without these scars...
i am a personal assistant to doctor hell,
i help him out until my body does swell.

he slices,
he dices,
i watch--i stare
hoping, i have no fear.

singing to be free,
to float away and see,
the bright side of day,
to be happy and play.

alone and forever,
scared and moreever,
sad, and crying
trapped and prying.

but i am a personal assistant of doctor hell,
and here i shall remain, slave, to dwell.
scrawled on the floor i cry in this cell,
because i am a personal assistant, to doctor hell.





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Re: personal assistant to doctor hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 12:54:31 PM AEST
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Definately interesting and different. Was well worth the time to read...


Re: personal assistant to doctor hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 01:46:49 PM AEST
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good write very interesting quite unique
Sharon


Re: personal assistant to doctor hell (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 05:23:42 PM AEST
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Very good poem very unique. I liked the rhyme scheme hadn't seen a poem by u in a while. Hope to see more soon.

Peace,
Joel


Re: personal assistant to doctor hell (User Rating: 1 )
by knowWhat_kind on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 05:23:09 PM AEST
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very cool poem i like it


Re: personal assistant to doctor hell (User Rating: 1 )
by nightrider on Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 10:59:38 AM AEST
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this was really a great write... i know your dr. hell, at least i know his cousin(or some other relative) and, yeah, not a fun guy... hang in there joe, we can all make it, even if we have to go down together.




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