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Array ( [sid] => 148719 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Courteousy Too Few [time] => 2009-03-26 00:25:00 [hometext] => I realize un-brazened is not a word. However, negating it seemed to provide for me the truest relationship to something inexplicable. [bodytext] => There are no misunderstandings to be drawn from my heart.
I am driving towards my purpose, re-awakening my conscious heart.
My conscience comes back to life.

At times, I dream of one to love me like I can love.
Mostly, as it happens, they do-- but I struggle with contentment.
I've opened up truly to few- but, I don't.

I have lived un-brazened by your lack of love for so long,
I have seen happiness, utter joy.
I have celebrated my life!
Yet, when you are here, I wish it were here with me.

Alas, it is not what I have... It is what I am that resounds my heart and strengthens my soul beyond the clasping of the feeble.

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A Courteousy Too Few

Contributed by odessa19 on Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 12:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

There are no misunderstandings to be drawn from my heart.
I am driving towards my purpose, re-awakening my conscious heart.
My conscience comes back to life.

At times, I dream of one to love me like I can love.
Mostly, as it happens, they do-- but I struggle with contentment.
I've opened up truly to few- but, I don't.

I have lived un-brazened by your lack of love for so long,
I have seen happiness, utter joy.
I have celebrated my life!
Yet, when you are here, I wish it were here with me.

Alas, it is not what I have... It is what I am that resounds my heart and strengthens my soul beyond the clasping of the feeble.

Copyright © odessa19 ... [ 2009-03-26 00:25:00]
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Re: A Courteousy Too Few (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 01:02:05 AM AEST
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YOU HAVE YOUR UPS & DOWNS-TWIST & TURNS,
& YOUR LOVE REALLY SOUNDS-LIKE A MIST THAT 4EVER BURNS! AWESOME INNER STRENGTH AS YOU ARE STRONG,GREAT POEM!!!!!

DAN!

Re: A Courteousy Too Few (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 03:35:30 AM AEST
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Hmmmm.. you may have started a debate on whether or not unbrazened is a word. Perhaps without the dash, it is. After all, the dictionary seems to be revised every few years and Alanis Morissette uses this very word in her song, Break. So, I think it's cool and even if its not, I salute you for using it.

Anyway, I like the poem too. It seems to convey a vulnerability for love and a strength to move on without it. Least that's what I get out of it. Interpretations aside, I like it no mater what.

Take care.

Tim
:-)

Re: A Courteousy Too Few (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 03:22:55 PM AEST
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Perhaps un-brazened will appear in the dictionary at some future date,lol.
What has appeared here is a deep, thoughtful write which I really enjoyed reading.
Good luck with many more

Steve

Re: A Courteousy Too Few (User Rating: 1 )
by eternalsunshine on Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 06:48:25 PM AEST
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such wonderful & rich write
enjoyed it dear
thank you

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