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Array ( [sid] => 148714 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => -YOUR AWFUL - [time] => 2009-03-25 19:57:38 [hometext] => This is not good poetry, For women to read! (Warning) Only a very, very, very angry dad could understand this! [bodytext] => Your awful,pernicious,filthy
and crude
Your not a mother,
Heres what a mother
should do

Share our kids
as their father
loves them to,
but you continue on
hurting,just like you do

So take your cash
and your sappy your eyeballs,
youll slip one day
as the ice will thaw

A misery in your life,
thatll haunt your
stingy mind,
Itll come and get you,
but all in time

So luster in your hundreds
with your attorney at hand,
but remember this you *****,
your the one,
that ruined our plan [comments] => 4 [counter] => 246 [topic] => 6 [informant] => 143 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

-YOUR AWFUL -

Contributed by 143 on Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 07:57:38 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Your awful,pernicious,filthy
and crude
Your not a mother,
Heres what a mother
should do

Share our kids
as their father
loves them to,
but you continue on
hurting,just like you do

So take your cash
and your sappy your eyeballs,
youll slip one day
as the ice will thaw

A misery in your life,
thatll haunt your
stingy mind,
Itll come and get you,
but all in time

So luster in your hundreds
with your attorney at hand,
but remember this you *****,
your the one,
that ruined our plan

Copyright © 143 ... [ 2009-03-25 19:57:38]
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Re: -YOUR AWFUL - (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 09:22:05 PM AEST
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Having at one time been an angry dad and especially someone who did not want the divorce, I sooooooooooo relate to this. I really feel the raw emotion of your anger in this one and am so sorry that you have to go through this.

Sincerely,

Tim

Re: -YOUR AWFUL - (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 10:25:30 PM AEST
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I have also been through this but on the other end of it, he kept everything...... Anyway....

I felt the anger and hurt in these words and I am also so sorry that you are going through this.

My personal opinion, when people split, because the adults cannot get along, unless there is a damn good reason to do so I do not ever think it is right to keep the children away from their parent, or their extended families ...... It makes me want to poke someone in the eyeball or kick em in the arss and say hey fools the kids need everyone!

Ughhhh sorry lol.

I hope things improve for you.

Giving you a super Shelby hug

Michelle

Re: -YOUR AWFUL - (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 12:05:43 AM AEST
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This must be get it off your chest nite but hey, that's o.k.
My daughter has had this problem not so in the distent past. Still he tries to use the almost three year old daughter to get back at her. Hey it's cool n tho cause she's got him by the ***** now.
When she gets him back in court he's gonna fall to his knees cause she's got all the truths now.
Hanf tuff, my friend her day is comming.
great writing.
Huggs, blessings,
emy

Re: -YOUR AWFUL - (User Rating: 1 )
by 12161216 on Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 06:45:55 PM AEST
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I'm a woman and I DON't timnd this at all. If your just stating your feelings thats fine. Your "wife" doesn't sound very nice anyway, so gender doesn't really matter when it boils down to it. I'm sorry you and her are going through such a horrible time. I hope you win the case :D

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