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Array ( [sid] => 14870 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => When [time] => 2003-03-25 07:35:00 [hometext] => leave comments PLEASE....... lol thank you and enjoy. oh and this poem is dedicated to my mother. [bodytext] => When I feel your hate it warms my soul.
When I taste your love it seems so cold.
When I hear your thoughts I throw them away.
When you stand your ground, i make you sway.
When your not around i'm at peace.
When your starting to argue i find my keys.
When you say I love you I walk away.
When you ask why I say i was lead astray.
When you show your emotions I ask why.
When you want to apologize i say i'd rather die.
When you want an answer I make you cry.
When you want something done I never try.
When there is a lesson to be taught, in this poem.
When the lesson is love, and that your never alone. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 240 [topic] => 55 [informant] => kims4ever [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

When

Contributed by kims4ever on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 07:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

When I feel your hate it warms my soul.
When I taste your love it seems so cold.
When I hear your thoughts I throw them away.
When you stand your ground, i make you sway.
When your not around i'm at peace.
When your starting to argue i find my keys.
When you say I love you I walk away.
When you ask why I say i was lead astray.
When you show your emotions I ask why.
When you want to apologize i say i'd rather die.
When you want an answer I make you cry.
When you want something done I never try.
When there is a lesson to be taught, in this poem.
When the lesson is love, and that your never alone.

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Re: When (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 09:09:09 AM AEST
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Your mother is wise! Listen to her,be with her,talk with her,I wish my mom was there so I could still hear her yell at me! Christina

Re: When (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 01:58:00 PM AEST
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i was a little lost on this one but i like your style..keep putting how you feel in words it helps greatly.
Sharon

Re: When (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomsLDY on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 11:14:26 PM AEST
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Your Mom loves you even when you don't think so. I know I get mad at Kim sometimes but I love her non the less and I'm sur your Mom feels the same way. this wa a very good write too!

Re: When (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 04:30:53 AM AEST
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Kim, You only have one mother. YES were young but are parents have been though this before us. There not Perfect there just leading us in the right path.

Re: When (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomsBBYgrl on Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 06:21:14 PM AEST
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This is a good poem but don't talk about your mom like that shes a really nice person and she loves you so much!

Re: When (User Rating: 1 )
by Desi on Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 09:26:05 AM AEST
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Do you have some resentment towards your mother? I think you should try to be nicer, she brought you into this world, she can take you out.

Re: When (User Rating: 1 )
by kims4ever on Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 09:50:08 PM AEST
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listen if you read the poem you will realize that it is about a typical teenager and how they treat thier mothers. And that no matter how bad it gets or how u treat them they will always be there for you.

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