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Array ( [sid] => 148699 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => early morning [time] => 2009-03-25 08:38:43 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I awake to a blank

screaming. . .

empty yourself.

every blossom becomes

my alarm.

alarming silence.

my nerves

so raw with expectation.

tension, envious

of my circumstance. . .

I crawl under

overwhelming comfort.

crisp, linen shelter. . .

comforting.

eternal dreamer.

basket of dreams.

share me, mine

as I succumb. . .

& revisit

for now, I am without.

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early morning

Contributed by elle on Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 08:38:43 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

I awake to a blank

screaming. . .

empty yourself.

every blossom becomes

my alarm.

alarming silence.

my nerves

so raw with expectation.

tension, envious

of my circumstance. . .

I crawl under

overwhelming comfort.

crisp, linen shelter. . .

comforting.

eternal dreamer.

basket of dreams.

share me, mine

as I succumb. . .

& revisit

for now, I am without.

Copyright © elle ... [ 2009-03-25 08:38:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: early morning (User Rating: 1 )
by leopardpie on Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 08:45:31 AM AEST
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sounds like you had a bad hangover when awoke with blossoms being your alarms. good poem

Re: early morning (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 08:46:38 AM AEST
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Absolutely with the honesty, I am not always quite sure what you're writing about but no matter what, I always enjoy whatever you write because even though I may not fully understand it, I like to think I do by putting all of my multiple interpretations on it. Your mind seems to have a vast wealth of inspiration just dying to jump onto the page.

Very unique!!!

Tim
(who was quite fascinated at all of the meaningsssssssssss I could put into this)

Re: early morning (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 09:04:14 AM AEST
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In response to your comment, Tim, thank you.
I fancy this about exactly what you mention, the
myriad possibilities of the blank page & our
inspiration derived from where ever, dreams,
circumstances or musings. . . whatever, outside
of our control. The sweetest inkling from beyond.
A friend of mine, the earliest morning when I'm
alone yet not. . . elle

Re: early morning (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 03:12:11 PM AEST
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yes, there are days when i wish i could just laze in bed all day...a lovely, eloquent write, i enjoyed it very much!

-phil

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