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Array ( [sid] => 148679 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Feelings [time] => 2009-03-23 22:46:15 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You say that you don't feel anything,
that there is nothing going on inside.
But I see your smile,
I hear your tears.

There are deep pools of feelings inside,
not empty barrels,
but full pools with no bottom,
waiting to come out.

Your laughter plays across my ears,
and I know your smiling.
That there is joy inside,
just screaming to come out.

I see the tears that run down your cheeks,
I see the sorrow that fills your heart.
That there is much pain,
in this hurt soul.

I see the anger in your eyes,
like great fires dancing to get out.
But I know your in control,
and that it will never burn anyone but who deserves it.

I feel the love inside of you,
for everyone that is close to your heart.
How your heart has a open door,
and is always ready to be there for a soul in need.

I see the mischief inside,
like a little girl wanting to prank a friend.
I know there is fun to be had,
whenever you are near.

I see the little girl,
who thinks she has no feelings.
I know this is not true for how can someone not feel,
yet make so many feel so many things.

I see all sides of you,
and know that this is all you are.
And I among many accept you for you,
don't you think its time to accept you too? [comments] => 1 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 43 [informant] => -Sinner- [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Feelings

Contributed by -Sinner- on Monday, 23rd March 2009 @ 10:46:15 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

You say that you don't feel anything,
that there is nothing going on inside.
But I see your smile,
I hear your tears.

There are deep pools of feelings inside,
not empty barrels,
but full pools with no bottom,
waiting to come out.

Your laughter plays across my ears,
and I know your smiling.
That there is joy inside,
just screaming to come out.

I see the tears that run down your cheeks,
I see the sorrow that fills your heart.
That there is much pain,
in this hurt soul.

I see the anger in your eyes,
like great fires dancing to get out.
But I know your in control,
and that it will never burn anyone but who deserves it.

I feel the love inside of you,
for everyone that is close to your heart.
How your heart has a open door,
and is always ready to be there for a soul in need.

I see the mischief inside,
like a little girl wanting to prank a friend.
I know there is fun to be had,
whenever you are near.

I see the little girl,
who thinks she has no feelings.
I know this is not true for how can someone not feel,
yet make so many feel so many things.

I see all sides of you,
and know that this is all you are.
And I among many accept you for you,
don't you think its time to accept you too?

Copyright © -Sinner- ... [ 2009-03-23 22:46:15]
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Re: Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 24th March 2009 @ 03:28:40 PM AEST
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very good indeed. i particularly liked this bit:

I see the little girl,
who thinks she has no feelings.
I know this is not true for how can someone not feel,
yet make so many feel so many things.

you exhibited great eloquence and logic with these words, awesome writing.

-Phil

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