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Array ( [sid] => 148673 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In My Eyes... [time] => 2009-03-23 14:13:50 [hometext] => When you're close to someone, or love someone, it makes it hard to see them clearly if they change until its too late [bodytext] => In my eyes you were the greatest; You used to be my hero

In my eyes you did nothing wrong; You made me want to be a better person

In my eyes you were beautiful; You may have been the one for me

In my eyes you were like a rock; I always felt safe when I was in your arms

In my eyes you had it all; I wanted to be just like you once

In my eyes you could've ruled the world; You had so much talent

In my eyes you were my world; I was so innocent and stupid

In my eyes I loved you; I would've done anything for you

In my eyes you never changed; I don't even know you now [comments] => 2 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 75 [informant] => Silver_Wings [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

In My Eyes...

Contributed by Silver_Wings on Monday, 23rd March 2009 @ 02:13:50 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

In my eyes you were the greatest; You used to be my hero

In my eyes you did nothing wrong; You made me want to be a better person

In my eyes you were beautiful; You may have been the one for me

In my eyes you were like a rock; I always felt safe when I was in your arms

In my eyes you had it all; I wanted to be just like you once

In my eyes you could've ruled the world; You had so much talent

In my eyes you were my world; I was so innocent and stupid

In my eyes I loved you; I would've done anything for you

In my eyes you never changed; I don't even know you now

Copyright © Silver_Wings ... [ 2009-03-23 14:13:50]
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Re: In My Eyes... (User Rating: 1 )
by thewizard on Monday, 23rd March 2009 @ 03:11:06 PM AEST
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Love can be cruel, and reading your words I can see that love has affected you. You have protrayed what your heart feels and shared it with others - thewizard

Re: In My Eyes... (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Tuesday, 24th March 2009 @ 07:44:12 AM AEST
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Great write. What you have written here I can relate to as I am sure so many others can too.
I am going through the exact same thing right now with my wife...I know that things have changed between us I am just not that willing to accept the facts. And I dont want to. I love her too much to let her go.

Thank you so much for sharing. Once again you did a great job putting your feeling into words.

Rich

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