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Array ( [sid] => 14866 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => my world [time] => 2003-03-25 05:35:00 [hometext] => if you read my work please leave a comment i would love to hear what you think of my work. [bodytext] => I hate the way you look at me, the way you turn your eyes and glare.
I hate the way you make me feel dead with so much despair.
I stand upon my shattered soul just shards of broken glass.
Wondering why i cannot be more then just a figment of the past.
My will is broken every time, it never stops, as this tedious rhyme.
I try to speak, and even yell.
My soul is tormented, a living hell.
I deserve no better, I do see why.
I cannot cleanse my soul, I never cry.
All is lost but not forgotten.
But the world itself is always taunting.
I have tried to escape to bring it to an end.
But it never works, i'm just swallowed whole again.
I feel no love, and so much pain.
I try so hard, with nothing to gain.
The words that i speak, are sad but true.
I hope what i feel never reaches you.
The world is full of chaos, and so i can relate.
How my emotions are so twisted and always in debate.
So if you are reading this, I just wanted you to know.
All my anger that burns inside, will always and forever grow. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 255 [topic] => 13 [informant] => kims4ever [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
my world

Contributed by kims4ever on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I hate the way you look at me, the way you turn your eyes and glare.
I hate the way you make me feel dead with so much despair.
I stand upon my shattered soul just shards of broken glass.
Wondering why i cannot be more then just a figment of the past.
My will is broken every time, it never stops, as this tedious rhyme.
I try to speak, and even yell.
My soul is tormented, a living hell.
I deserve no better, I do see why.
I cannot cleanse my soul, I never cry.
All is lost but not forgotten.
But the world itself is always taunting.
I have tried to escape to bring it to an end.
But it never works, i'm just swallowed whole again.
I feel no love, and so much pain.
I try so hard, with nothing to gain.
The words that i speak, are sad but true.
I hope what i feel never reaches you.
The world is full of chaos, and so i can relate.
How my emotions are so twisted and always in debate.
So if you are reading this, I just wanted you to know.
All my anger that burns inside, will always and forever grow.




Copyright © kims4ever ... [ 2003-03-25 05:35:00]
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Re: my world (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 02:04:28 PM AEST
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your writing is very intense and very good..i feel for your pain..i was there once also..but somehow found a way out..i hope you find the exit.

Sharon


Re: my world (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomsLDY on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 11:04:38 PM AEST
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This is a great write teve keep it up you are really talented.


Re: my world (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomsLDY on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 11:05:44 PM AEST
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sorry steve i was typing to fast and missed the s


Re: my world (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 04:34:41 AM AEST
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Kim, Love hurts been we all get though it in times. I am trying to get my ex back but seems it's taken longer than I thought. You can read my poems and you can tell I love him alot




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