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That blossom in spring
You taught me with love
So this i shall bring

I'll attach a note
With a ribbon pulled through
Simple words to express
How much i miss you

Each bloom that i pick
Carry the thoughts that i feel
For when an angel did take you
It was my heart they did steal

I kneel by your side
But seldom say much
I'll give you the flowers
But our hands never touch

Im constantly longing
For that smile on your face
And to feel the warmth
Of your loving embrace

Time offers me little
But the love that you gave
Thats why im here kneeling
With flowers for your grave.
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A BLOOM FOR A ROSE

Contributed by seanmcparland on Saturday, 21st March 2009 @ 12:24:46 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I'll gather the flowers
That blossom in spring
You taught me with love
So this i shall bring

I'll attach a note
With a ribbon pulled through
Simple words to express
How much i miss you

Each bloom that i pick
Carry the thoughts that i feel
For when an angel did take you
It was my heart they did steal

I kneel by your side
But seldom say much
I'll give you the flowers
But our hands never touch

Im constantly longing
For that smile on your face
And to feel the warmth
Of your loving embrace

Time offers me little
But the love that you gave
Thats why im here kneeling
With flowers for your grave.

Copyright © seanmcparland ... [ 2009-03-21 12:24:46]
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Re: A BLOOM FOR A ROSE (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 21st March 2009 @ 05:27:36 PM AEST
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I wouldn't mind if someone gave that speach at my funeral. If you have indeed lost someone
I am truly sorry!

Re: A BLOOM FOR A ROSE (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 21st March 2009 @ 11:47:33 PM AEST
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Oh Sean, this is truly beautiful.. I think your Mom is looking down at you with such pride and admiration..
This is really beautiful and so tender...
Hugs
Jenni

Re: A BLOOM FOR A ROSE (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 22nd March 2009 @ 03:45:52 PM AEST
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My GOD! this was beautiful! So painfully beautiful.
There is a sadness and longing in every word. It is a
lovely caress in the soul of one who grieves. Exceptional
write, friend. So completely emotive ~

Be well ~

~ Breezy

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