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Array ( [sid] => 148573 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Birds [time] => 2009-03-18 14:34:46 [hometext] => This was the first poem I wrote (exactly as it was written), I was almost eight. :P [bodytext] => I am waiting for a bird to arrive,
from a branch down low or a branch up high

They make beautiful songs,
I can listen to it all day long
I feed them everyday,
hoping that they would stay
Some times they like it,
some times they don't
Sometimes they'll eat it
sometimes they won't

But I love birds,
animals that have no words

They don't live in houses,
they live in trees
They don't live in honey combs like bumblebees

I've said it before,
I love birds
Animals that have no words
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Birds

Contributed by bluethewolf on Wednesday, 18th March 2009 @ 02:34:46 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry



I am waiting for a bird to arrive,
from a branch down low or a branch up high

They make beautiful songs,
I can listen to it all day long
I feed them everyday,
hoping that they would stay
Some times they like it,
some times they don't
Sometimes they'll eat it
sometimes they won't

But I love birds,
animals that have no words

They don't live in houses,
they live in trees
They don't live in honey combs like bumblebees

I've said it before,
I love birds
Animals that have no words




Copyright © bluethewolf ... [ 2009-03-18 14:34:46]
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Re: Birds (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 18th March 2009 @ 03:42:33 PM AEST
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this is brilliant for an 8 year old, it really is.

-phil


Re: Birds (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 18th March 2009 @ 08:54:05 PM AEST
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WOW.. I wish I could have written as well at this early age.. I don't think I even thought of writing then...
Well done... Welcome to YPDC...
Jenni


Re: Birds (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 18th March 2009 @ 10:39:40 PM AEST
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I love it. Coming from the mind of a child. What an awesome thing.

Thank you for a most enjoyable read.

Tim


Re: Birds (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 27th March 2009 @ 11:41:10 AM AEST
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awww very sweet. You reminded me of the first poem I wrote at about the same age. I still have it.




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