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Array ( [sid] => 148529 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Good-Bye Baby [time] => 2009-03-16 18:08:07 [hometext] => When you get bucked off, the best medcine is get right back on...... [bodytext] => Hey baby we tried,
We done everything we could.
We tried to pull this through,
But the tug of war, overcame me..today
I have no strength left in me
I have no more words to say.

I’m worn by the long trips home,
With you just staring out that window.
I’m thinking to myself..
Whoever thought our Rome….
Would fall…
Our self built Coliseum of marble
Wall…,
We both dreamed it would
Stand the test of time.
But today it crumbled in a heap,
I couldn’t hold it up any longer
I’m just too shattered in the mind….

When we was both younger
We had life by the horns.
It was a 20 year old ride,
we rode it… until
all that was left of the rose
was the thorns.
Although I can still smell
The memory.. its longed past.
It went by so fast…
Oh baby, I really thought
This would last…

Some are…
happy with just soaring in the clouds.
But baby, I want to explore
What’s beyond those stars….
I want so much, more….
What hurts the most,
I know this aint the only Rodeo.
This aint the only video
Of a love that went wrong,
Its not the only sad song
On the radio…..

You will eventually move on..
And so will I,
Our love fell today …hun.
In a blink of an watered up eye,
I hope the hurt subsides soon,
So one day, I can dust myself off
And wipe these tears away……

Good-Bye Baby
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Good-Bye Baby

Contributed by recyclebin on Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 06:08:07 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Hey baby we tried,
We done everything we could.
We tried to pull this through,
But the tug of war, overcame me..today
I have no strength left in me
I have no more words to say.

I’m worn by the long trips home,
With you just staring out that window.
I’m thinking to myself..
Whoever thought our Rome….
Would fall…
Our self built Coliseum of marble
Wall…,
We both dreamed it would
Stand the test of time.
But today it crumbled in a heap,
I couldn’t hold it up any longer
I’m just too shattered in the mind….

When we was both younger
We had life by the horns.
It was a 20 year old ride,
we rode it… until
all that was left of the rose
was the thorns.
Although I can still smell
The memory.. its longed past.
It went by so fast…
Oh baby, I really thought
This would last…

Some are…
happy with just soaring in the clouds.
But baby, I want to explore
What’s beyond those stars….
I want so much, more….
What hurts the most,
I know this aint the only Rodeo.
This aint the only video
Of a love that went wrong,
Its not the only sad song
On the radio…..

You will eventually move on..
And so will I,
Our love fell today …hun.
In a blink of an watered up eye,
I hope the hurt subsides soon,
So one day, I can dust myself off
And wipe these tears away……

Good-Bye Baby




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Re: Good-Bye Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 06:25:56 PM AEST
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Beautiful in its sadness....loved the imagery here...
Jenni_K


Re: Good-Bye Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 06:40:55 PM AEST
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a wonderful, spectacular write. emotional, deep, sad, beautiful, eloquent. i'm running out of adjectives here! i could not have written this any better myself. 5 stars.

-phil


Re: Good-Bye Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 07:48:06 PM AEST
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You captured such a vast array of emotion in this write.
Beautiful work.

Hugs
Michelle


Re: Good-Bye Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 17th March 2009 @ 12:27:09 AM AEST
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This is really good my friend. So very distraught but the writer finds hope and inspiration even in his sad words.

*applauds*

Take care and keep on rockin'.

Tim


Re: Good-Bye Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 25th September 2009 @ 11:10:43 PM AEST
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Save a horse and ride a cow boy. smiles...
Very sad but great writing.
Did you mean jump back on the horse or ride a new one?
Yeah, I'm being silly tonite.
Big huggs,
emy




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