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Array ( [sid] => 148528 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bless me [time] => 2009-03-16 17:45:33 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Bless me, grab my hand,
take me away from here
Wipe the fog from the window of my soul,
take away the blur and make the vision clear
Clean the grime and dirt deep within my skin,
scrub away the hate and envy
Cut away the long strands of pride and stubborness,
flush out the dead organs and stitch new ones inside me

Bless me, hold my hand tight,
Care away the wounds and scars
Balance the darkness and light,
end the painful emotional wars
Love me and pry me open up,
revealing what I hid so long
Lift my heart and mend it,
force me to sing a new song

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Bless me

Contributed by bluethewolf on Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 05:45:33 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Bless me, grab my hand,
take me away from here
Wipe the fog from the window of my soul,
take away the blur and make the vision clear
Clean the grime and dirt deep within my skin,
scrub away the hate and envy
Cut away the long strands of pride and stubborness,
flush out the dead organs and stitch new ones inside me

Bless me, hold my hand tight,
Care away the wounds and scars
Balance the darkness and light,
end the painful emotional wars
Love me and pry me open up,
revealing what I hid so long
Lift my heart and mend it,
force me to sing a new song

Copyright © bluethewolf ... [ 2009-03-16 17:45:33]
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Re: Bless me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 06:37:45 PM AEST
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beautiful, deep, intelligent writing. i especially liked this bit:

'Wipe the fog from the window of my soul,
take away the blur and make the vision clear
Clean the grime and dirt deep within my skin,
scrub away the hate and envy'

great work.

-phil

Re: Bless me (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 07:38:11 PM AEST
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Delightful read,

This is so deep and powerful, I feel strength and an uplifting moment in this write.

Welcome to YPDC

Michelle

Re: Bless me (User Rating: 1 )
by kye on Tuesday, 17th March 2009 @ 03:52:49 PM AEST
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Thru the pain you wrote of, I felt strength, honesty, humililty and thoughtfulness.

The inner you has written from very deep caverns.

Keep writing and I hope it will help you feel better in time. I say this, because it helped me.

Kie

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