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Array ( [sid] => 148525 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Magnetic [time] => 2009-03-16 14:38:50 [hometext] => Just a poem about someone I just can never have. [bodytext] => Your scent in the air again,
it lingers until I give in
Unlocking, unleashing,
renewing the pain within
Constant disappearing,
reappearing and seducing
Constant grin and light,
leaving and staying with me
You've broken me down,
styrofaom block by styrofaom block,
and play with me in your hands like puddy
Closing and opening,
filling and emptying me
You're drawing me in,
magnet like
I wonder if you'll ever let me go,
just leave me alone
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Magnetic

Contributed by BlueTheWolf on Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 02:38:50 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

Your scent in the air again,
it lingers until I give in
Unlocking, unleashing,
renewing the pain within
Constant disappearing,
reappearing and seducing
Constant grin and light,
leaving and staying with me
You've broken me down,
styrofaom block by styrofaom block,
and play with me in your hands like puddy
Closing and opening,
filling and emptying me
You're drawing me in,
magnet like
I wonder if you'll ever let me go,
just leave me alone

Copyright © BlueTheWolf ... [ 2009-03-16 14:38:50]
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Re: Magnetic (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 03:10:17 PM AEST
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great writing. i especially like this bit:

'You've broken me down,
styrofaom block by styrofaom block,
and play with me in your hands like puddy'

very creative and original. good work.

-phil

Re: Magnetic (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 06:29:04 PM AEST
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i can really relate to this...it's as if you're drawn in because u want it so bad, but u really think u cant have it so u just want to be released b/c it hurts. but of course, dont ever giv up that easily, there's always a chance. great poem from top to bottom, take care
-K.Z.

Re: Magnetic (User Rating: 1 )
by jessb3 on Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 11:30:55 PM AEST
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Great write! I can certainly relate to this poem...some people are very much like magnets and draw you in.

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