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[aid] => mick
[title] => Omniscient Illustrator
[time] => 2009-03-15 18:09:36
[hometext] => This was inspired by the wisdom of Venkat. The sound of AUM has stayed with me.
[bodytext] => I gave you waves that furled and rolled
Beneath misty rainbows
I pounded sand from a castaway treasure
Into molds of softest powder
I painted birds in hues of unknown color
To dance within your reach
I smeared the sun on the horizon
To filter changing light
I cast a cave in pewter limestone
Renewed by salt and daily spray
-Still you doubt me-
I shaped tiny minute molecules
In strings of DNA
I blueprinted your hair and fingertips
For chromes to gene in pairs
I wove a voice from a silken thought
Into songs uniquely you
I spoke muses toward neurons firing
To think and wish and dream
I placed you in a mother’s kiln
A temperate to the clay
-Still you question me-
I moved an unknown mountain
To strengthen your youthful gaze
I brought the winds of summer early
Just to see you smile
I stole grief from all your teardrops
Then placed them in the rain
I made leaves most brilliant Autumn
From the glory of your laugh
I placed silence in your night time
To AUM you into dreams
Still you search for me
[comments] => 7
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[topic] => 62
[informant] => kye
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Omniscient Illustrator
Contributed by
kye
on
Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 06:09:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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I gave you waves that furled and rolled
Beneath misty rainbows
I pounded sand from a castaway treasure
Into molds of softest powder
I painted birds in hues of unknown color
To dance within your reach
I smeared the sun on the horizon
To filter changing light
I cast a cave in pewter limestone
Renewed by salt and daily spray
-Still you doubt me-
I shaped tiny minute molecules
In strings of DNA
I blueprinted your hair and fingertips
For chromes to gene in pairs
I wove a voice from a silken thought
Into songs uniquely you
I spoke muses toward neurons firing
To think and wish and dream
I placed you in a mother’s kiln
A temperate to the clay
-Still you question me-
I moved an unknown mountain
To strengthen your youthful gaze
I brought the winds of summer early
Just to see you smile
I stole grief from all your teardrops
Then placed them in the rain
I made leaves most brilliant Autumn
From the glory of your laugh
I placed silence in your night time
To AUM you into dreams
Still you search for me
Copyright ©
kye
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2009-03-15 18:09:36]
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Re: Omniscient Illustrator
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by shelby on
Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 06:33:14 PM AEST
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Well Venkat inspired you well sweety.
This poem is a delight to read, it is captured moment of time and all that is good, reverent and soft.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Omniscient Illustrator
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by emystar on
Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 06:39:11 PM AEST
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wow kie,
You definently got it going on. Very creative and awesome writing.
beautiful.
Huggs, smiles, blessings, peace,
emy |
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Re: Omniscient Illustrator
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 07:20:03 PM AEST
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Wow Kie, you have outdone yourself with this... It is an excellent write. One of your best!!!
Jenni |
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Re: Omniscient Illustrator
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by elle on
Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 07:51:09 PM AEST
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This is a magnificent rendering you have brought to the page. Inspiring &
compassionate with the tempering characterists of love renouned in the Creator.
Surely, God created man so that He could be known. One of the best writes I 've ever read.
peace. elle |
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Re: Omniscient Illustrator
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 08:18:19 PM AEST
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wonderful. beautiful. outstanding. what more can i say?
top class.
-phil |
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Re: Omniscient Illustrator
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by venkat on
Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 11:05:05 PM AEST
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Dearest Kye,
While reading your poetry..,
"Lightenings of glory burned in my skies, Splendors of insight rained on my chest
Rivers of thought flowed from my bliss, Birds of light took flight from my heart!"
..There are five great cosmic principles that maintain this creation..
(Rudra) the sound that creates fire of consciousness,(Visnu) the all pervading light that creates waters of life, (Brahma) the word that creates matter and bodies,( Indra) the great cosmic (elecric)enrgy that creates air, movement and all colourful changes in mater/ bodies, and finally (Aditya) the pure knowledge that perceives every atom in the existence. God manifests his glory through these five eternal principles...in your poem I am seeing the glory of Brahma ( Lord of word), and Indra ( Lord of imagination & evolution)..for Indra filters the Sun rays and paints the atmosphere,
and the glory of Aditya lord of perception..
Blessed art thou..enjoy the bliss of Indra the universal mind, with all his glory of Heaven.
venkat
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Re: Omniscient Illustrator
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th March 2009 @ 12:53:43 AM AEST
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Well, lets hear it for inspiration!!!! I love everything about this but my favorite line, I wove a voice from a silken thought
Into songs uniquely you just blows me away. I cannot explain it.. it just does!!! It seems to sum up everything about this poem, inspiration and creation.
Impressive!!!
T
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