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[aid] => mick
[title] => Becoming More
[time] => 2009-03-14 14:12:59
[hometext] => Each stanza is a tribute to a poem written here or to a poet/poetess who has become more.
[bodytext] => Water captured for a moment
held with hands imagining
seamlessly rippling skies
silvered in gazed magnificence
A pen anxious to speak in tenure
quelled by drifts of blotted emotion
inscribed for the messenger waiting
as the journeyman is guided away
Tears swayed by gripping memories
confined to release in captivity
to a sphere engrossed with living
from walls toppled by yesterday
Curtains blued by fading grief
warmed, subdued and tender
and keyed to yearn for songs
composed of gentle ambience
Hope framed in gossamer realms
cherished as priceless antiquity
bloomed in days almost forgotten
by a sea froth and patient
Love given in boundless quantity
scarred from twisted pearls
a heart draught within shadow
yearning to clasp and hold
Emancipating vital laughter
sheered on vivid scripts
flirting with the ledges
where sun and water meet
*Note*
Becoming more means you have that something that has perfected itself and moves me clear to my soul. Thank you.
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[counter] => 334
[topic] => 69
[informant] => kye
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[score] => 29
[ratings] => 6
[editpoem] => 1
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Becoming More
Contributed by
kye
on
Saturday, 14th March 2009 @ 02:12:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
poets
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Water captured for a moment
held with hands imagining
seamlessly rippling skies
silvered in gazed magnificence
A pen anxious to speak in tenure
quelled by drifts of blotted emotion
inscribed for the messenger waiting
as the journeyman is guided away
Tears swayed by gripping memories
confined to release in captivity
to a sphere engrossed with living
from walls toppled by yesterday
Curtains blued by fading grief
warmed, subdued and tender
and keyed to yearn for songs
composed of gentle ambience
Hope framed in gossamer realms
cherished as priceless antiquity
bloomed in days almost forgotten
by a sea froth and patient
Love given in boundless quantity
scarred from twisted pearls
a heart draught within shadow
yearning to clasp and hold
Emancipating vital laughter
sheered on vivid scripts
flirting with the ledges
where sun and water meet
*Note*
Becoming more means you have that something that has perfected itself and moves me clear to my soul. Thank you.
Copyright ©
kye
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2009-03-14 14:12:59]
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Re: Becoming More
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th March 2009 @ 03:44:49 PM AEST
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beautifully written, great work.
-phil |
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Re: Becoming More
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th March 2009 @ 08:11:15 PM AEST
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He stops, he reads, and he notices, amongst the myriads of hope, dreams, laughter and moss, that you worked in the word "seamlessly ".
I could see myself in a lot of this. While I know it's "a tribute to a poem written here or to a poet/poetess" that walks about this place, I could still personally relate to so much of it.
We, as in the collective known as YPDC, should all give you a personal thank you for such a beautiful tribute. So, I thank you. As I have said, you are very kind and this poem definitely conveys your kindness and thoughtfulness.
'Tis truly a treasure for all of us to splendor in.
I am thanful to have met you and I am thankful that you can come here to be moved clear to your soul.
Thank you,
Tim
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Re: Becoming More
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th March 2009 @ 08:35:49 PM AEST
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*oops*
That one line this poem definitely conveys your kindness and thoughtfulness.
should have read:
This poem definitely conveys your kindness, thoughtfulness and talent.
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Re: Becoming More
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by emystar on
Saturday, 14th March 2009 @ 10:50:00 PM AEST
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Girl you come back with a vengence and your writing is very creative and powerful. Again welcome home.
luv ya girl.
big huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy
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Re: Becoming More
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 14th March 2009 @ 11:01:49 PM AEST
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A beautiful tribute. Thank you for sharing this..
Jenni |
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Re: Becoming More
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by shelby on
Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 12:11:39 AM AEST
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She has not missed a beat with her poetry.
Good to see you back once more, beautiful poem my dear.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Becoming More
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by venkat on
Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 08:42:18 AM AEST
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My dear poetess. Here are many suns and moons on their eternal pilgrimage..though you say this is a tribute to a poem or a poet/poetess..
I feel this is the best tribute to your soul which has perceived many brilliant emotions of eternal nature and its heart..
If I were the author of this poem I have to dedicate this to you only since you have the power to emancipate the vital laughter of poets like me.
I know, you will become a source of inspiration to many poets here.
God bless the bliss of my soul to you.
your
venkat |
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Re: Becoming More
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by ScorpionFire88 on
Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 02:25:45 PM AEST
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| Perfect way to do a tribute. I love it. Thank you for sharing this with all of us. ((((HUGS)))) |
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Re: Becoming More
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by elle on
Tuesday, 5th May 2009 @ 07:39:20 PM AEST
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| a tribute to a tribute. . . you have become more. . . peace. elle |
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