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Array ( [sid] => 148435 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Sent You a Small Email [time] => 2009-03-11 18:56:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I sent you a small email
Just to see if you'd respond
Asked you whether it was snowing
At your house or on your lawn
But you never did write back
Ad so I really couldn't see
Whether you had changed your email
Or just didn't care 'bout me

Your mom gave me your number
And too soon I couldn't wait
So I texed you 'bout the campout
And I gave you all the dates
Said I wanted you to come
And hoped your "To Do" list was small
Cause I knew you wouldn't make it
If you were in basketball

Then I sat around and waited
Twenty minutes, maybe more
My fragile hope was dwindling
That a text would be in store
Put my cellphone in my pocket
'Bout to give up the whole thing
When I thought I heard it vibrate
And my heart began to sing

It said "I hope that I can make it
Cause I really want to go.
I had so much fun there last year
When we both made mizzito.
I'll try and ask my parents
And if they both agree
Then I'll see you at the campout--
When was it? June 23?" [comments] => 3 [counter] => 227 [topic] => 21 [informant] => toomuchfreetime [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
I Sent You a Small Email

Contributed by toomuchfreetime on Wednesday, 11th March 2009 @ 06:56:53 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



I sent you a small email
Just to see if you'd respond
Asked you whether it was snowing
At your house or on your lawn
But you never did write back
Ad so I really couldn't see
Whether you had changed your email
Or just didn't care 'bout me

Your mom gave me your number
And too soon I couldn't wait
So I texed you 'bout the campout
And I gave you all the dates
Said I wanted you to come
And hoped your "To Do" list was small
Cause I knew you wouldn't make it
If you were in basketball

Then I sat around and waited
Twenty minutes, maybe more
My fragile hope was dwindling
That a text would be in store
Put my cellphone in my pocket
'Bout to give up the whole thing
When I thought I heard it vibrate
And my heart began to sing

It said "I hope that I can make it
Cause I really want to go.
I had so much fun there last year
When we both made mizzito.
I'll try and ask my parents
And if they both agree
Then I'll see you at the campout--
When was it? June 23?"




Copyright © toomuchfreetime ... [ 2009-03-11 18:56:53]
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Re: I Sent You a Small Email (User Rating: 1 )
by simsalabim on Thursday, 12th March 2009 @ 01:45:17 AM AEST
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poems about cell phones...........wow


Re: I Sent You a Small Email (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflyperfect on Thursday, 12th March 2009 @ 06:27:41 PM AEST
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Very Creative. I never thought about writing anything like this.... it is very well done too. I enjoyed this read, it let me smile and that's always a good thing : )

With Love,
~Butterfly


Re: I Sent You a Small Email (User Rating: 1 )
by thistle_and_fern on Tuesday, 2nd March 2010 @ 12:54:53 AM AEST
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Courage to make the first move.

well done, enjoyed your poem. Well put together and told a delightful story.




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