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[aid] => mick
[title] => BLOOD'S BOILING!!!!!
[time] => 2009-03-11 18:35:23
[hometext] => ??????????? thoughts, ramblings
[bodytext] => My God, he's dragged her into his hell.
What a sad, sadistic, thing he's done.
Bring him to his knees, sweet Jesus.
You must interveine for little ones.
God, blood's boiling in my whole being.
To take advantage of a precious soul.
How can he sleep at nite, pervert?
It's **** time for justice 's tunes, roll.
Hatred has consumed him, thru-n-thru.
My God, can't just lock him in a cell
He should be down where crazzys go.
Take him, sweet Jesus, hearts scream, yell.
Our sweet God on high, Please, please?
Too much innocense ripped, stolen away.
They wreck havoc inside luv's heart.
Can't get past damage, kaos, hey!
I humble before you, great powerful, luv.
Steady our shaking, trembling beings.
We'll never understand such beastful act.
Stop evil acts we're all sadly seeing.
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[counter] => 517
[topic] => 43
[informant] => emystar
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BLOOD'S BOILING!!!!!
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emystar
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Wednesday, 11th March 2009 @ 06:35:23 PM in AEST
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My God, he's dragged her into his hell.
What a sad, sadistic, thing he's done.
Bring him to his knees, sweet Jesus.
You must interveine for little ones.
God, blood's boiling in my whole being.
To take advantage of a precious soul.
How can he sleep at nite, pervert?
It's **** time for justice 's tunes, roll.
Hatred has consumed him, thru-n-thru.
My God, can't just lock him in a cell
He should be down where crazzys go.
Take him, sweet Jesus, hearts scream, yell.
Our sweet God on high, Please, please?
Too much innocense ripped, stolen away.
They wreck havoc inside luv's heart.
Can't get past damage, kaos, hey!
I humble before you, great powerful, luv.
Steady our shaking, trembling beings.
We'll never understand such beastful act.
Stop evil acts we're all sadly seeing.
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emystar
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Re: BLOOD'S BOILING!!!!!
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 11th March 2009 @ 06:43:53 PM AEST
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Awww Hun, I am so sorry.. I think I have an idea what this is about. There is a God somewhere out there..and He's listening... so keep talking...
Hugs and Love..and Healing
Jenni |
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 11th March 2009 @ 08:51:27 PM AEST
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Emy,
I am not sure what has happened but this I relate to believe me I do.
PM me
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: BLOOD'S BOILING!!!!!
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 11th March 2009 @ 10:51:26 PM AEST
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Emy..this describes the evil act sof a man..
they don't know what punishment awaits them..
"Too much innocense ripped, stolen away.
They wreck havoc inside luv's heart."
those lines are very good and really appealing..
Hugs and love.. :-)venkat
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Re: BLOOD'S BOILING!!!!!
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by simsalabim on
Thursday, 12th March 2009 @ 01:39:30 AM AEST
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| he did intervene....too bad you missed it....or misjudged it...whatever...winamp is a miracle ain't it? |
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Re: BLOOD'S BOILING!!!!!
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by simsalabim on
Thursday, 12th March 2009 @ 01:53:36 AM AEST
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| thanks for the PM.....i don't get winamp either.... |
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Re: BLOOD'S BOILING!!!!!
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by shanat on
Thursday, 12th March 2009 @ 04:21:09 AM AEST
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great writing emy 1 of the best ive read so far!
thanks for you wonderful comments b4
inspires me to write more more an more:))))
peace and love
shanat:)) xxx |
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by Voice of the Silent on
Thursday, 12th March 2009 @ 08:56:25 AM AEST
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God may be out there I don't know about that but if you have problems or on of your friends do. If they need your help take matters into your own hands and solve your problem yourself, with help and support from others if you need it. that's my suggestion even though I have no idea what's going on.
good write emy sorry your mad
hope you solve the problem soon
-kelly |
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 12th March 2009 @ 01:14:52 PM AEST
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im pretty sure i know what this is about because someone i know just had this happen to her, may justice be served in both instances,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: BLOOD'S BOILING!!!!!
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by kye on
Friday, 13th March 2009 @ 08:35:58 PM AEST
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Em, your heart is so big and you have such a gente spirit. For your blood to be boiling something horrific must have happened.
I think the world of you Em. I'm glad to see you are still writing poetry.
Kie |
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Re: BLOOD'S BOILING!!!!!
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 02:01:24 AM AEST
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This cries out the agony that would abhor any sane person. I know what you speak of and it is unbelievable that things like that must happen to our innocent children. I have quite often thought that death would be too easy for those monsters. A shotgun to you know where would be more appropriate. If they live, then so be it but they should be left in their pool of blood to fend for themselves. Maybe this is cruel but nearly as cruel as what they do to our innocents. :-(
A very powerful poem and I am sincerely sorry that you or someone you know has fallen victim to the monsters.
Tim |
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by ScorpionFire88 on
Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 05:25:52 PM AEST
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| Very good poem. It touched me deeply. Thank you for sharing this with us. (((((HUGS))))) |
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Re: BLOOD'S BOILING!!!!!
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by eternalsunshine on
Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 06:43:25 PM AEST
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ohhh dear, your words should be televised
to defeat evil lurking in our world
we need more souls like you dear
good write
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th March 2009 @ 10:46:31 AM AEST
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| I've heard say that the greatest and even all evils in this world are there to help us see and appreciate the greatest and all good in this world. Seems you can't have one without the other, but oh how I wish there was another way.... |
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Re: BLOOD'S BOILING!!!!!
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th March 2009 @ 05:54:45 PM AEST
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My gosh hun, WTH?? You pull your reader in with the very first line. How
devastating and heart piercing it is. It prepares us for a painful read.
Your heart is so immense, sweetie and I'm sorry that such nightmares
impose themselves upon your world. *hugs you tight*
~ Breezy
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Re: BLOOD'S BOILING!!!!!
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by 3660Days on
Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 08:40:47 PM AEST
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Ah yes, some (justifiably) angry poetry! Keep up the good writing emy!
:-P |
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Re: BLOOD'S BOILING!!!!!
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by midnightluna622 on
Wednesday, 11th August 2010 @ 06:49:23 PM AEST
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this poem is very well written i got chills from this poem!
hope u keep writing |
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