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Show them their dreams can be believed in
It only takes a heart of strong
To show these people where they belong

Don’t rule the world but walk with it
Take a chance when that’s the ticket
Being afraid made us stronger so
Feeling scared is fine you know

Live in a new life; breathe in a new air
Don’t be afraid if it’s your problems you’ll share
A difference can be made by believing in the words
“A difference can be done if you save the world”

Can you look and listen to this tale of hope?
Ensure they know and hold the rope?
Don’t judge someone when you don’t know them
Ask them their name; even get to know them

So speak the words of a thousand children
Show them love is something to believe in
For a difference can be made my boys and girls
A difference can be done if you save the world

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Save The World

Contributed by Crookedpoet09 on Tuesday, 10th March 2009 @ 06:34:58 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Wake the eyes of a thousand children
Show them their dreams can be believed in
It only takes a heart of strong
To show these people where they belong

Don’t rule the world but walk with it
Take a chance when that’s the ticket
Being afraid made us stronger so
Feeling scared is fine you know

Live in a new life; breathe in a new air
Don’t be afraid if it’s your problems you’ll share
A difference can be made by believing in the words
“A difference can be done if you save the world”

Can you look and listen to this tale of hope?
Ensure they know and hold the rope?
Don’t judge someone when you don’t know them
Ask them their name; even get to know them

So speak the words of a thousand children
Show them love is something to believe in
For a difference can be made my boys and girls
A difference can be done if you save the world

Copyright Â© Crookedpoet09 ... [ 2009-03-10 18:34:58]
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Re: Save The World (User Rating: 1 )
by dark_poet on Wednesday, 11th March 2009 @ 09:52:12 AM AEST
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the children will continue this world, hopefully leading it to the right path. this was well written piece, nothing to complex but fairly simple to read. your basic choice of words brought out the meaning of this piece and the flow was on point.

good write

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