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Array ( [sid] => 148397 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Simple Love [time] => 2009-03-09 23:37:02 [hometext] => I realize this piece doesnt have descriptive words...guess its just a simple love poem. :o) [bodytext] => Darling,
Together we walk
Focusing on the soft touch
feeling every textured
crevice, of your skin.
I love you so much,
Watching your
High-lighted Long strands
Frolicking in the breeze,
The want of, smelling
Your fragrance, freshness
Co-mingled with the mountain wind,
The sparkle in your eyes,
Glitters,
Like the hope of a wish,
On a falling star.
Darling I’m not
A man of big words,
Hell baby, I probably don’t
Even know a third
Of what’s in Mr. Webster’s.
But I do know…..
As you pick that wild flower,
What the meaning of life is…
the meaning is you darling.
I love your soft touch
I love you so much.
I long that you see,
That, I have enough of me,
To spend eternity together,
Until the end of our time.
I’m excited of the possibilities
spending forever with you.
I know at times,
I do your head in
Just thankful you understand,
when I give ya that
What did I do, Grin.
You always have had that
Knack, of making me feel
That I’m standing above any crowd.
You allow me to brighten that smile
On a bad day,
taking away the dark storm cloud.
If I could define our love,
More than life itself ,everything above,
You being... my very best friend,
From the beginning, to the very end.

Darling what do you say,
We walk down from this foothill.
Lets take the long way home,
Enjoy the spill of this,
Until the sun goes down…
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Simple Love

Contributed by recyclebin on Monday, 9th March 2009 @ 11:37:02 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Darling,
Together we walk
Focusing on the soft touch
feeling every textured
crevice, of your skin.
I love you so much,
Watching your
High-lighted Long strands
Frolicking in the breeze,
The want of, smelling
Your fragrance, freshness
Co-mingled with the mountain wind,
The sparkle in your eyes,
Glitters,
Like the hope of a wish,
On a falling star.
Darling I’m not
A man of big words,
Hell baby, I probably don’t
Even know a third
Of what’s in Mr. Webster’s.
But I do know…..
As you pick that wild flower,
What the meaning of life is…
the meaning is you darling.
I love your soft touch
I love you so much.
I long that you see,
That, I have enough of me,
To spend eternity together,
Until the end of our time.
I’m excited of the possibilities
spending forever with you.
I know at times,
I do your head in
Just thankful you understand,
when I give ya that
What did I do, Grin.
You always have had that
Knack, of making me feel
That I’m standing above any crowd.
You allow me to brighten that smile
On a bad day,
taking away the dark storm cloud.
If I could define our love,
More than life itself ,everything above,
You being... my very best friend,
From the beginning, to the very end.

Darling what do you say,
We walk down from this foothill.
Lets take the long way home,
Enjoy the spill of this,
Until the sun goes down…

Copyright © recyclebin ... [ 2009-03-09 23:37:02]
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Re: Simple Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 10th March 2009 @ 12:12:35 AM AEST
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Okay, I was gonna go through and count all the descriptive words but no. I'm just gonna say I disagree :P

It 'tis a lovely gesture of love and I'd say it's got plenty of descriptive words. Ah, love poems. The things that make up life and they are so cool.

Thanks for sharing it with the rest uf us hopeless romantics.

Tim

Re: Simple Love (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 10th March 2009 @ 02:28:44 AM AEST
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Very sweet and wonderfully refreshing..this is not simple love..this is the stream of heart felt love..
the sincere extremely beautiful feeling of love flowed from beginning to the end..
what more descriptive words of love it require..This is the loveliest poem of the day.
God bless love and happiness to you.:-)venkat

Re: Simple Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 10th March 2009 @ 10:37:45 AM AEST
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Aha...this teacher thinks that Bin may need a lesson on descriptive words....cuz as I see it, you have just the right amount of them in this rather beautiful and heartfelt poem...(contrary to what your author's note says)....
Beside the breeze, the sun and the stars... I sense 'love' is in the air....Great write, my friend..
Hugs
Miss Jenni

Re: Simple Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 10th March 2009 @ 11:37:17 AM AEST
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very sweet tale, keep up the good work.

-phil

Re: Simple Love (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Tuesday, 10th March 2009 @ 11:43:14 AM AEST
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this is a beautifull love poem. so sweet. I wish i could write like this about love..nicely done.

Re: Simple Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Ess3nc3 on Tuesday, 10th March 2009 @ 07:07:40 PM AEST
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An amicable piece of literature. Very well written, definitely from the heart. Every syllable speaks for your immense love for this person.

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