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Always On My Mind
Contributed by
airhead
on
Saturday, 7th March 2009 @ 04:55:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Always on my mind
I can’t forget
Happy memories
No regrets
To have & to hold
Was my dream
Not yours though
Or so it seems
Always on my mind
I can’t forget
Happy memories
No regrets
The hours, the minutes
Seconds go by slow
Waiting & hoping
You’ll come to my door
Always on my mind
I can’t forget
Happy memories
No regrets
I know you Love me
I love you too
Please let go, of what’s
Keeping me from you
Always on my mind
I can’t forget
Happy memories
No regrets
Copyright ©
airhead
... [
2009-03-07 16:55:37]
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Re: Always On My Mind
(User Rating: 1 )
by passion4life on
Monday, 9th March 2009 @ 08:09:27 AM AEST
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Very nice flow, the sentences worked well and showed some true raw emotion. No regrets... Easier said then done.
If you find the time, I've posted my first true attempt at poetry, entitled THE END. I'd appreciate any feedback or comments. Thank you and keep up the good work, I've truly enjoyed reading your poems. |
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