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I Know
Contributed by
mooshken26
on
Saturday, 7th March 2009 @ 02:10:16 PM in AEST
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As I sit here listening to
60’s songs, I know in my heart
you and I will never be
as close as we once were
In a moment, foolish but heartfelt
our friendship was destroyed
now we barely speak
you don’t acknowledge me
I know you care or you wouldn’t
hurt like this
I know you more than you know me
it hurts that you would listen
to another.
I know now more than ever
our friendship is lost forever
all because of a foolish and heartfelt moment
Copyright ©
mooshken26
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2009-03-07 14:10:16]
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Re: I Know
(User Rating: 1 )
by dark_poet on
Monday, 9th March 2009 @ 09:32:07 AM AEST
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the meaning in this piece was brought out well. the last 2 of the 4 parts, it got alittle shaky with the flow. nothing creative caught my eye in this piece but i felt where you was coming from
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Re: I Know
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 08:21:13 AM AEST
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This brought a tear to my eye and put a lump in my throat not only because it's nicely written but also because I can relate to it so much. I don't know why there are people that would prefer to listen to others about you instead of you yourself but there just are. *sigh*
Anyway, nice poem but sorry you had to go through that.
Take care,
Tim
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