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Array ( [sid] => 148339 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Flower [time] => 2009-03-06 13:36:44 [hometext] => A poem about stages of life with eventual death... it's all just one big cycle... [bodytext] => I wither with age
I grow with the sun
I drink water
Life has begun

I try to stay pretty
and grow up tall
But as I age
I eventually fall

My petals are red
The blood of my heart
Racing through my veins
And setting me apart

Everyone else
Looks healthy and good
As I wither and bend
But I knew I would

Then my color fades
Now I'm black and dry
No rain can save me
No reason to try

My time has come
It's time to die
I was beautiful once
Now just let my spirit fly [comments] => 5 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 43 [informant] => butterflyperfect [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Flower

Contributed by butterflyperfect on Friday, 6th March 2009 @ 01:36:44 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I wither with age
I grow with the sun
I drink water
Life has begun

I try to stay pretty
and grow up tall
But as I age
I eventually fall

My petals are red
The blood of my heart
Racing through my veins
And setting me apart

Everyone else
Looks healthy and good
As I wither and bend
But I knew I would

Then my color fades
Now I'm black and dry
No rain can save me
No reason to try

My time has come
It's time to die
I was beautiful once
Now just let my spirit fly

Copyright © butterflyperfect ... [ 2009-03-06 13:36:44]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Flower (User Rating: 1 )
by Crookedpoet09 on Friday, 6th March 2009 @ 02:12:56 PM AEST
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The poem flowed nicely off my tongue, good stuff, keep it up my brother.

Re: Flower (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 6th March 2009 @ 03:49:35 PM AEST
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lovely work, it was an inciteful, interesting write.

with love,
phil

Re: Flower (User Rating: 1 )
by Recyclebin on Friday, 6th March 2009 @ 06:04:52 PM AEST
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Very nice... The beauty will forever be in my eye ... :o)

Liked this one a lot.

~BiN~

Re: Flower (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 6th March 2009 @ 06:16:51 PM AEST
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I really like the metaphor all throughout. This is also very spiritual and has a nice touch of wisdom.

Loved it.

Thank you for an enjoyable read.

Tim

Re: Flower (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 6th March 2009 @ 08:54:48 PM AEST
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very nice work .. absolutely beautiful.:-)venkat

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