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Footsteps echo down the hall
it is time
somethings happening,
I'm getting a eerie sensation
that everyone around me
has been acting.
I float outside of my body
as the torture begins
Mentally I am bleeding
tears are exploding
but
oh so slowly flowing,
In the day room
I am trying
to write a letter
that will never be sent...
after a pause
I silently scream
and begin once again.

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In The Realm Of The Maddness

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Wednesday, 4th March 2009 @ 12:36:12 AM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

Footsteps echo down the hall
it is time
somethings happening,
I'm getting a eerie sensation
that everyone around me
has been acting.
I float outside of my body
as the torture begins
Mentally I am bleeding
tears are exploding
but
oh so slowly flowing,
In the day room
I am trying
to write a letter
that will never be sent...
after a pause
I silently scream
and begin once again.

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2009-03-04 00:36:12]
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Re: In The Realm Of The Maddness (User Rating: 1 )
by tin on Wednesday, 4th March 2009 @ 01:02:59 AM AEST
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there is no word to descibe the admiration and familiararity i have for this poem...

Re: In The Realm Of The Maddness (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 4th March 2009 @ 01:10:44 AM AEST
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Wow, that title is very very appropriate and I think you nailed the feeling of this poem with it!!! Nicely done.

Thanks for an enjoyable read.

Tim

Re: In The Realm Of The Maddness (User Rating: 1 )
by allforyou on Wednesday, 4th March 2009 @ 10:24:52 AM AEST
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a little manic.

Re: In The Realm Of The Maddness (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 4th March 2009 @ 01:37:50 PM AEST
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great writing, i think many people could relate to this.

-phil

Re: In The Realm Of The Maddness (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Wednesday, 4th March 2009 @ 07:44:59 PM AEST
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excellent. . ! peace. elle

Re: In The Realm Of The Maddness (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 4th March 2009 @ 09:04:59 PM AEST
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Whoa! You totally captured the "madness". It's almost eerie actually.
Your ending incites an anxiety that is oddly comforting. (at least it's
familiar, you know?) The scary thing is breaking free of that madness
and daring to keep going. Your last line echoes that and so much more!

Great post!!

~ Breezy

Re: In The Realm Of The Maddness (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 10th March 2009 @ 05:22:47 PM AEST
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This is really good, it sent shivers up my spine. Great Job!

Re: In The Realm Of The Maddness (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 2nd April 2009 @ 08:38:54 PM AEST
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We're all in the realm of madness. That's why I reside in the country. Not many idiots drift this way to me but when one does it's a bummer. Smile.
Good work.
Huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: In The Realm Of The Maddness (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 23rd November 2014 @ 04:12:42 PM AEST
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vivid and tangibly real, a moment as one huge glaring image is
placed in the readers mind- following with a shot directly to the heart,

hugs n' love nessa

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