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Array ( [sid] => 148259 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Just Friends [time] => 2009-03-02 10:46:12 [hometext] => For some people you just do anything, hooked for a love that may never be, and you wait. [bodytext] => When I asked her to smile she looked me in the eye
That’s when I saw her tear as she began to cry
I gave her a gentle hug to comfort her fears
And then a tissue to wipe away the tears

With soft words I offered her my hand
Taking her weight I helped her to stand
That’s when her smile really began to form
In that very moment lightening began the storm

And with a fierce wind rain began to pour
As a sudden gust blew open the door
In the doorway stood a tall handsome man
With her big smile to him she ran

So I departed feeling torn leaving them alone
Returning to my place to sit by the phone
And if again she rings I will be there
In hope that perhaps one day, for me she will care

Tuesday, 3 March 2009
3:26:24 AM
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Just Friends

Contributed by Balmain_Tiger on Monday, 2nd March 2009 @ 10:46:12 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

When I asked her to smile she looked me in the eye
That’s when I saw her tear as she began to cry
I gave her a gentle hug to comfort her fears
And then a tissue to wipe away the tears

With soft words I offered her my hand
Taking her weight I helped her to stand
That’s when her smile really began to form
In that very moment lightening began the storm

And with a fierce wind rain began to pour
As a sudden gust blew open the door
In the doorway stood a tall handsome man
With her big smile to him she ran

So I departed feeling torn leaving them alone
Returning to my place to sit by the phone
And if again she rings I will be there
In hope that perhaps one day, for me she will care

Tuesday, 3 March 2009
3:26:24 AM

Copyright Â© Balmain_Tiger ... [ 2009-03-02 10:46:12]
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Re: Just Friends (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 2nd March 2009 @ 11:43:24 AM AEST
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Wow... I felt like I was in the room watching all this unfold. I could feel the dejection, sense the hope and the longing and I could tell that the love you have for this person is deep...... Don't give up..
Jenni

Re: Just Friends (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlightKiss on Monday, 2nd March 2009 @ 12:26:40 PM AEST
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This is so sad and really deep...
I can picture this whole scene in my head and it almost brought tears to my eyes...
Great job.

Re: Just Friends (User Rating: 1 )
by -Sinner- on Monday, 2nd March 2009 @ 01:01:36 PM AEST
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Very well done, I think a lot of men can understand this poem. I know reading it I felt old feelings like that well up.

Re: Just Friends (User Rating: 1 )
by PreciousKitten on Monday, 2nd March 2009 @ 01:28:58 PM AEST
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this one makes me cries. i know exactly how you feel in this one. good show, keep on.

Re: Just Friends (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 2nd March 2009 @ 02:48:30 PM AEST
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oh how i know this painful feeling all too well. the imagery was fantastic and it flowed joyfullly. it was a great read.

-phil

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