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Array ( [sid] => 14825 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Summer's Sky [time] => 2003-03-24 05:35:00 [hometext] => I called this poem, "Summer's Sky," as i gazed outside and remembered the difficulty that last summer had brought me. This is a song and I hope you enjoy this. [bodytext] => Verse 1
They told me that everything would be okay
That I could go through every single day
That I was suppost to make them proud
Soon to be disappointed in what they had found

I tried my best, did all I could
But whatever I did never seemed that good
I don’t think that I can go on
I’m leaving here, I don’t belong

Chorus
I went to look but I was blind
Now the pieces I have to find
I always thought I’d be okay
I never thought I’d have to say

Goodbye you all
Now is the time
Its no ones fault
Except for mine

Verse 2
I never thought I’d die this way
I wish that I had the courage to stay
They’ll never get what I wanted to be
Maybe now they’ll remember me

The girl who seemed happy all the time
The girl they thought they'd never find
Lieing on the floor after one gun shot
I am the one everyone forgot

Chorus

Venia don’t go
Kellem come home
Venia don’t go
Kellem come home [comments] => 5 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 36 [informant] => SpreadYourWings [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Summer's Sky

Contributed by SpreadYourWings on Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Verse 1
They told me that everything would be okay
That I could go through every single day
That I was suppost to make them proud
Soon to be disappointed in what they had found

I tried my best, did all I could
But whatever I did never seemed that good
I don’t think that I can go on
I’m leaving here, I don’t belong

Chorus
I went to look but I was blind
Now the pieces I have to find
I always thought I’d be okay
I never thought I’d have to say

Goodbye you all
Now is the time
Its no ones fault
Except for mine

Verse 2
I never thought I’d die this way
I wish that I had the courage to stay
They’ll never get what I wanted to be
Maybe now they’ll remember me

The girl who seemed happy all the time
The girl they thought they'd never find
Lieing on the floor after one gun shot
I am the one everyone forgot

Chorus

Venia don’t go
Kellem come home
Venia don’t go
Kellem come home




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Re: Summer's Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 08:55:00 AM AEST
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So sad. Beautiful writing

sleepless_siren


Re: Summer's Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 10:55:18 AM AEST
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sad song but i am glad you are here today to post it. good write

Sharon


Re: Summer's Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by XXXsilvervoodooXXX on Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 01:31:34 PM AEST
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very good


Re: Summer's Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 03:36:12 PM AEST
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Lovely song, even tho it's so sad... I'm happy it's beyond you now.....
Jenni


Re: Summer's Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 01:25:51 AM AEST
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such a sad write...but very beautifully written




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