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[title] => Only In a Dream
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[hometext] => This one is for you sweet pea.
[bodytext] => While walking through a field one day, I tripped upon a stone of gray, then struck my head on that stone where I blacked out all alone. My mind soon drifted to a place, where clearly focussed was your face, your eyes shined a brilliant glow, your golden hair was let to flow...Upon bare shoulders beautifully, as it cascaded down on me.
You placed a soft hand on my face, which forced my pulse to rage and race. You brought your breath so close to mine, and whispered only one short line. "Yes, I do, I'll always be there just for you." It forced my dreaming eyes to tear, for suddenly I had no fears. You were lovely, warm, and kind, the one I thought I'd never find.
Then suddenly as I came to, my dream had ended thoughts of you, as birds were singing up above, to wake me from a dream of love. So there I was standing tall, my head was clearing from the fall, but now I want to fall again, return me back to where I'd been. Back to you within my dreams, as crazy as that may seem. Wait...Why dream a fantasy, when I have you in reality, my beautiful sweet pea.
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Only In a Dream
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insane_outsider
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Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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While walking through a field one day, I tripped upon a stone of gray, then struck my head on that stone where I blacked out all alone. My mind soon drifted to a place, where clearly focussed was your face, your eyes shined a brilliant glow, your golden hair was let to flow...Upon bare shoulders beautifully, as it cascaded down on me.
You placed a soft hand on my face, which forced my pulse to rage and race. You brought your breath so close to mine, and whispered only one short line. "Yes, I do, I'll always be there just for you." It forced my dreaming eyes to tear, for suddenly I had no fears. You were lovely, warm, and kind, the one I thought I'd never find.
Then suddenly as I came to, my dream had ended thoughts of you, as birds were singing up above, to wake me from a dream of love. So there I was standing tall, my head was clearing from the fall, but now I want to fall again, return me back to where I'd been. Back to you within my dreams, as crazy as that may seem. Wait...Why dream a fantasy, when I have you in reality, my beautiful sweet pea.
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Re: Only In a Dream
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by olasunkanmi on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 08:45:27 AM AEST
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| REALLY I FLOW WITH YOU UR WOKS IS NICE I LOVE THE FLOW IN IT KEEP FLOWIN G FRIEND |
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Re: Only In a Dream
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 08:49:17 AM AEST
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What a beautiful poem. The thought that you would rather have a dream with your love than a reality without.
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Re: Only In a Dream
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 10:40:28 AM AEST
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| Wonderful poem, so easy reading and the flow draws you on to each new line, Thx. |
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Re: Only In a Dream
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 10:59:33 AM AEST
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well written, enjoyable read
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Re: Only In a Dream
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by Jaylee123 on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 12:06:43 AM AEST
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| This poem is a real tear jerker. The one in which it was written is a very LUCKY person. |
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