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The night chill over comes me
Out of the corner of my eyes
I see shadows moving in the darkness
I’m running away, but I keep coming back
So much distress, all I do, is merely regress.
You’re Whispers in the wind
They are calling me in,
It will be my undoing,
The beginning ,
The beginning of the end.
Whispers in the wind
I try to pretend
This weakness won’t overextend.

I’m trying not to think about you and me
All the pain that you gave me.
It’s the essence of your heart
That makes my own bleed,
Oh how I plead, not this deed.
Why can’t you just leave me be?
You’re Whispers in the wind
They are calling me in,
It will be my undoing,
The beginning ,
The beginning of the end.
Whispers in the wind
I try to pretend
This weakness won’t overextend.

I sense you watching me
The night chill over comes me
Out of the corner of my eyes
I see shadows moving in the darkness
I’m running away, but I keep coming back
So much distress, all I do, is merely regress.
You’re Whispers in the wind
They are calling me in,
It will be my undoing,
The beginning ,
The beginning of the end.
Whispers in the wind
I try to pretend
This weakness won’t overextend.

I gave everything to you and me
Believe me I loved you, don’t follow me.
I have nothing left in my eyes.
The feelings I’m trying to suppress
Nothing to caress, my heart is a mess
Why cant you just leave me be?
You’re Whispers in the wind
They are calling me in,
It will be my undoing,
The beginning ,
The beginning of the end.
Whispers in the wind
I try to pretend
This weakness won’t overextend.
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Whispers in the Wind

Contributed by recyclebin on Friday, 27th February 2009 @ 12:35:55 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I sense you watching me
The night chill over comes me
Out of the corner of my eyes
I see shadows moving in the darkness
I’m running away, but I keep coming back
So much distress, all I do, is merely regress.
You’re Whispers in the wind
They are calling me in,
It will be my undoing,
The beginning ,
The beginning of the end.
Whispers in the wind
I try to pretend
This weakness won’t overextend.

I’m trying not to think about you and me
All the pain that you gave me.
It’s the essence of your heart
That makes my own bleed,
Oh how I plead, not this deed.
Why can’t you just leave me be?
You’re Whispers in the wind
They are calling me in,
It will be my undoing,
The beginning ,
The beginning of the end.
Whispers in the wind
I try to pretend
This weakness won’t overextend.

I sense you watching me
The night chill over comes me
Out of the corner of my eyes
I see shadows moving in the darkness
I’m running away, but I keep coming back
So much distress, all I do, is merely regress.
You’re Whispers in the wind
They are calling me in,
It will be my undoing,
The beginning ,
The beginning of the end.
Whispers in the wind
I try to pretend
This weakness won’t overextend.

I gave everything to you and me
Believe me I loved you, don’t follow me.
I have nothing left in my eyes.
The feelings I’m trying to suppress
Nothing to caress, my heart is a mess
Why cant you just leave me be?
You’re Whispers in the wind
They are calling me in,
It will be my undoing,
The beginning ,
The beginning of the end.
Whispers in the wind
I try to pretend
This weakness won’t overextend.

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Re: Whispers in the Wind (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 27th February 2009 @ 06:10:48 AM AEST
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Hang in there, Bin.... I can identify with this piece.... Nicely done.....
Jenni

Re: Whispers in the Wind (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 27th February 2009 @ 08:26:39 AM AEST
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lovely writing, the imagery was very good and lucid. good work.

-phil

Re: Whispers in the Wind (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlightKiss on Friday, 27th February 2009 @ 12:13:53 PM AEST
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wow, what a great poem...

tough times, i'm guessing? most of my poems come from my life experiences too. like said before, hang in there. things'll get better. believe me.

anyway, great job. loved it.

Re: Whispers in the Wind (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 27th February 2009 @ 11:10:48 PM AEST
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Song lyrics? Kew-el. Gots some nice rhythm goin' on there.

Anyway, I really like it and it was as if I could hear the melody in my head.

Need a drummer?

Anywho, like what everybody else said (assuming this is based on truth & the here and now).... hang in.

Take care,

Tim

Re: Whispers in the Wind (User Rating: 1 )
by Loende on Saturday, 28th February 2009 @ 11:32:04 PM AEST
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I gave everything to you and me
Believe me I loved you, don’t follow me.
I have nothing left in my eyes.

Wow....this whole piece is such an emotional write, and one that I'm sure all of us can relate to one way or another. Personally, for me, the above lines grabbed me. Lost love, is the heaviest of burdens that you can't quite get your shoulder under. Great job. Thank you for sharing it with us all.

Be well,
~Loende

Re: Whispers in the Wind (User Rating: 1 )
by passion4life on Monday, 9th March 2009 @ 08:14:38 AM AEST
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Breathtaking imagery, a natural flow. You have a great talent. Thank you for sharing this and giving others, such as myself, a chance to get lost in the words that express the pain felt when a love is lost.

If you find the time, I've posted my first true attempt at poetry, entitled THE END. I'd appreciate any feedback or comments. Thank you and keep up the good work, I've truly enjoyed reading your poems.

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