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Array ( [sid] => 148204 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mother's Love [time] => 2009-02-26 22:57:44 [hometext] => its about the love for our mothers [bodytext] => The womb is like the exit of heavens gate
Flying toward surface before walking on two feet
Filled with life energy under discrete
It has been Hibernating for the future
Conditioned early emotions for the offspring

A mother in labor, happy but still mourning
A child at birth , unaware of its surrounding
Two lives brought together like a favorite novel
Turning the pages of a brand new chapter
The family created, reaching the joyous climax
The plot is revealed, recall of the flashbacks
Its already been printed in human life scriptures
A young persons first true love is to a mother [comments] => 4 [counter] => 323 [topic] => 2 [informant] => ek_da_poet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Mother's Love

Contributed by ek_da_poet on Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 10:57:44 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The womb is like the exit of heavens gate
Flying toward surface before walking on two feet
Filled with life energy under discrete
It has been Hibernating for the future
Conditioned early emotions for the offspring

A mother in labor, happy but still mourning
A child at birth , unaware of its surrounding
Two lives brought together like a favorite novel
Turning the pages of a brand new chapter
The family created, reaching the joyous climax
The plot is revealed, recall of the flashbacks
Its already been printed in human life scriptures
A young persons first true love is to a mother

Copyright © ek_da_poet ... [ 2009-02-26 22:57:44]
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Re: Mother's Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 27th February 2009 @ 06:58:45 AM AEST
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A beautiful and touching write....well said!!!
Jenni

Re: Mother's Love (User Rating: 1 )
by ShaonKra on Friday, 27th February 2009 @ 07:57:25 AM AEST
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Interesting, effective use of technique

Re: Mother's Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 27th February 2009 @ 08:13:04 AM AEST
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so true, well said.

-phil

Re: Mother's Love (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 28th February 2009 @ 04:35:16 AM AEST
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one must agree. it is the truth well said..well written.:-)venkat

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