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Comes from love’s deep ambiance.
So surreal; Non entity of linguistic string
Tonight nothing else exists
I don’t need sunlight,
To feel your warmth amongst this abyss
Come with me,
Enter the Twilight.

These sunglasses may hide my eyes,
Look beyond; I cannot hide the feelings,
That burn from the approaching sunrise.
Take this first bite into the night.
Don’t tremble, Take my hand,
Our love has an exclusive right.
We aren’t unworthy of,
It’s our time to worship this love.

It’s not supposed to happen,
But let’s not change this obsession.
We both desire this song
Of harmonic progression.
A love that is so primeval,
A natural state of lust that is chaotic evil.
I don’t need sunlight,
To feel your warmth amongst this abyss
Come with me,
Enter the Twilight.

Its unholy matrimony,
Under the stars together.
My love, its your right to patrimony
This love will last forever.
Let’s live this immortality to the fullest,
Feel the flood,
Come with me,
taste the pureness of this blood.
I don’t need sunlight,
To feel your warmth amongst this abyss
Just trust me ……
Enter the Twilight
Enter the Twilight
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Loves Twilight

Contributed by recyclebin on Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 12:20:06 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

This fatal kiss I bring,
Comes from love’s deep ambiance.
So surreal; Non entity of linguistic string
Tonight nothing else exists
I don’t need sunlight,
To feel your warmth amongst this abyss
Come with me,
Enter the Twilight.

These sunglasses may hide my eyes,
Look beyond; I cannot hide the feelings,
That burn from the approaching sunrise.
Take this first bite into the night.
Don’t tremble, Take my hand,
Our love has an exclusive right.
We aren’t unworthy of,
It’s our time to worship this love.

It’s not supposed to happen,
But let’s not change this obsession.
We both desire this song
Of harmonic progression.
A love that is so primeval,
A natural state of lust that is chaotic evil.
I don’t need sunlight,
To feel your warmth amongst this abyss
Come with me,
Enter the Twilight.

Its unholy matrimony,
Under the stars together.
My love, its your right to patrimony
This love will last forever.
Let’s live this immortality to the fullest,
Feel the flood,
Come with me,
taste the pureness of this blood.
I don’t need sunlight,
To feel your warmth amongst this abyss
Just trust me ……
Enter the Twilight
Enter the Twilight

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Re: Loves Twilight (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 12:39:08 AM AEST
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woo-hoo!!

*applauds*

I miss the ol' writes of Vampirequeen and her poems about the vampyres!!!! (Yes, I spelled vampyre with a "y") Anyways, I love reading these. So, ol' Vampirequeen would be honored that you have taken over in her absence.

But watch out, one of them there vampyreslayers may be out and about, so they (the vampyres) must always be wary of the danger. They're only immortal until the stake strikes in the right place.

Anyway, I love it.

Kew-el!!!

Tim

P.S. The word "trust" in the same poem of vampyres. Is that one of them oxymorons?

Re: Loves Twilight (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 01:20:47 AM AEST
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Aww..lovely fantasy....

Re: Loves Twilight (User Rating: 1 )
by texasw97 on Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 07:29:44 AM AEST
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I hope one day I might enter this twilight. Take care.

Re: Loves Twilight (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 08:02:40 AM AEST
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it flowed beautifully and had some fullfilling imagery. i like the dark twist to it and the passion of the love. great poem.

-phil

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