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Array ( [sid] => 148187 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => last photo of our race [time] => 2009-02-25 22:44:02 [hometext] => [bodytext] => One of my first shots at free verse it has some rhyme but still. hope you like it

Our final storm comes so fast
This might be human kinds last
Rain comes down so hard
It like god takes a picture before we die
Thunder like the snap of the shot
Lightning the flash that makes skin rot

Our final storm comes in so fast
It kills all of human kind
And god is sitting in his high room
Practicing his photography

For the perfect shot of man kind
While we stare death in the face
God is getting a special picture of the genocide of our race
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last photo of our race

Contributed by Voice of the Silent on Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 10:44:02 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

One of my first shots at free verse it has some rhyme but still. hope you like it

Our final storm comes so fast
This might be human kinds last
Rain comes down so hard
It like god takes a picture before we die
Thunder like the snap of the shot
Lightning the flash that makes skin rot

Our final storm comes in so fast
It kills all of human kind
And god is sitting in his high room
Practicing his photography

For the perfect shot of man kind
While we stare death in the face
God is getting a special picture of the genocide of our race

Copyright © Voice of the Silent ... [ 2009-02-25 22:44:02]
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Re: last photo of our race (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 11:20:42 PM AEST
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What a wonderful comparison..God the photographer..and lightening the flash.
Very good .. Venkat

Re: last photo of our race (User Rating: 1 )
by dark_poet on Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 12:01:55 AM AEST
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i can agree with you on this. i love the metaphors on this with lighning dieing and photography. excellent write my friend

kelly brent i hope to see more of your work, take cares

dark poet,

Re: last photo of our race (User Rating: 1 )
by 3660Days on Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 12:13:41 AM AEST
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I have to say, the comparison of lightning with photography....brilliant! Those are the kinds of images and concepts that have the potential to take a poem that extra step. Bravo to you.

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