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I Wake Up In Love With You . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 04:51:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Slowly i rise
each day it's the same,
i wake up in love and you're
to
blame.
Today was no different
despite that it's knew,
for though we are married
i still dream of
you.
I
wake up in love
with one thought
in mind
no sweeter an angel
could i ever find,
and were you a poem
of love so true
my one wish would be
but to rhyme with
you.
To what do i owe
in this life of mine?
recieving a gift such as
thee,
a lady who's love
is no less than divine
then that of a goddess would
be.
So
now you can see
why i love going to sleep
and dreaming
the whole night through,
'tis here in my heart
in which you're a part
why i wake up in love with
you.
Ben
myheartsvoice
&
bjps
where your kisses i keep
as i wake up in love with
you.
Ben
myheartsvoice
&
bjps
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Re: I Wake Up In Love With You . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 05:07:33 PM AEST (User
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Wow..I don't know how you do it everytime, Ben..but well done..
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Re: I Wake Up In Love With You . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 09:23:48 PM AEST (User
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I'm with jen, do know how you do it every time.
Joan has to be the most luved women on this planet. You difinently are blessed.
say hey for me.
Don't ever stop writing these masterpeices.
I'll say it again, you restore ones faith in-n-luv.
big huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: I Wake Up In Love With You . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 07:55:19 AM AEST (User
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this is unbelievably good. the flow is perfect and the lines end in just the right place. a love poem with this much warmth and affection, i would struggle to find. superb.
-phil |
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Re: I Wake Up In Love With You . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Monday, 9th March 2009 @ 10:37:32 PM AEST (User
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Beautifully done as always you do.
Aah....what a lovely line!.
"and were you a poem of love so true my one wish would be but to rhyme with you".
wonderfully refreshing..:-)venkat
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