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Cars in Traffic
Contributed by
smoothie012
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Tuesday, 24th February 2009 @ 09:33:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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In the midst of the whirlwind we call life
I often wonder who dealt the cards
who flipped the switch
who broke the barrier
who pulled the trigger
who hit play
who sent the acceptance
but in the end
does it really matter?
we are all just waves in the pool
crayons in the classroom
and cars in traffic
Copyright ©
smoothie012
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2009-02-24 21:33:24] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Cars in Traffic
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 24th February 2009 @ 09:58:41 PM AEST (User
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Ain't this the truth!! Brilliant write.... I love this..
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Re: Cars in Traffic
(User Rating: 1 ) by simsalabim on
Tuesday, 24th February 2009 @ 10:45:11 PM AEST (User
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who stabbed me?
cars in traffic?
why r u here?
it's over for me and you |
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Re: Cars in Traffic
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 10:15:50 AM AEST (User
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very true. frank and intelligent writing.
-phil |
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