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Array ( [sid] => 148158 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => La Mort de Madame Jenea' [time] => 2009-02-24 15:32:44 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Woman scorned, in dead of night
Contemplating wrong and right
Wishing neither morning light
nor the sun with glory shining

Better she should hide away
Shun the bitter truth of day
Let the lies of darkness play
in minds beset by loathsome pining



Life has come and life is gone
Nothing more to build upon
Nothing left but devil dawn
and endless hours of empty breath

Reasons few and far between
Their shadows cast upon the green
Like ghosts of hope unclearly seen
that haunt the outer rim of death




Whispered sighs and silent fears
A final, fatal, wave of tears
A woeful flood of wasted years
The river crests beyond the brink

The inner voice of self esteem
Is lost within a tide of screams
To drown with pride and treasured dreams
Her world awash in but a blink



So she will seek the long eclipse
With poison raised to bleeding lips
She cries then sighs and calmly sips
As peacefully the deed is done

A bon voyage , a fond farewell
She flees her paragon of hell
And shatters life's abusive spell
To claim the rest that's duly won








Useless sun with glory shining
minds beset by loathsome pining

The river crests beyond the brink
her world awash in but a blink

Empty hours of endless breath
haunt the outer rim of death

And peacefully the deed is done
She claims the rest she's duly won







L. Carling c2009







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La Mort de Madame Jenea'

Contributed by Rakerman1999 on Tuesday, 24th February 2009 @ 03:32:44 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



Woman scorned, in dead of night
Contemplating wrong and right
Wishing neither morning light
nor the sun with glory shining

Better she should hide away
Shun the bitter truth of day
Let the lies of darkness play
in minds beset by loathsome pining



Life has come and life is gone
Nothing more to build upon
Nothing left but devil dawn
and endless hours of empty breath

Reasons few and far between
Their shadows cast upon the green
Like ghosts of hope unclearly seen
that haunt the outer rim of death




Whispered sighs and silent fears
A final, fatal, wave of tears
A woeful flood of wasted years
The river crests beyond the brink

The inner voice of self esteem
Is lost within a tide of screams
To drown with pride and treasured dreams
Her world awash in but a blink



So she will seek the long eclipse
With poison raised to bleeding lips
She cries then sighs and calmly sips
As peacefully the deed is done

A bon voyage , a fond farewell
She flees her paragon of hell
And shatters life's abusive spell
To claim the rest that's duly won








Useless sun with glory shining
minds beset by loathsome pining

The river crests beyond the brink
her world awash in but a blink

Empty hours of endless breath
haunt the outer rim of death

And peacefully the deed is done
She claims the rest she's duly won







L. Carling c2009











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Re: La Mort de Madame Jenea' (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 24th February 2009 @ 04:55:45 PM AEST
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some great imagery here and i loved the french influence. good, original writing.

-phil


Re: La Mort de Madame Jenea' (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 12:03:52 AM AEST
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Dear Larry.. This is a marvellous painting
of another Cleopatra..wonderfully done
excellent in its form and expression. :-)venkat


Re: La Mort de Madame Jenea' (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 12:54:26 AM AEST
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Larry,
where you been? Geez you just all run off and leave me , LOL.
Well my friend you have not skipped a beat in the performance of arts in poetic verse and talent.

I toss a daisy and a dozen roses at my kings feet

whoooooooooooooooooooooo

Hugs
Michelle


Re: La Mort de Madame Jenea' (User Rating: 1 )
by kye on Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 06:58:19 PM AEST
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You are the reason I LOVE poetry. You've never written a poem that I didn't feel completely smitten with. The imagery, the feel, flow, technique etc etc.

From the first poem I read of yours (a few moon years ago) and till this very moment I am still addicted to my favorite writer.

Even when you write in a dark sort of way, its still AWESOME.

I just happened by this one as I was flipping along and it made my night.

Thank you.

Kie


Re: La Mort de Madame Jenea' (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 13th April 2014 @ 06:02:40 PM AEST
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wow, awesome perfection larry, beautifully written as always,

hugs n' love nessa




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