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Array ( [sid] => 148143 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Can't Say When [time] => 2009-02-23 18:52:42 [hometext] => Gotta move on right? Please comment! Thanks for reading! [bodytext] => “Hey it’s been quite a while hello Jenn how’ve you been?” “It’s so crazy to see you, this is Sarah my friend.”

“Me?” “I’m doing great life is good can’t complain, hey I’m going to Vegas, wish me luck on the games!”

“So whatcha been up to is life treating you well?” “I’ve been meaning to call you, sorry I’ve just been busy as hell.”

“I just got a new place I’m still breaking it in, unpacking takes so damn long, I don’t know where to begin.”

“So how’s the new boyfriend, sorry what was his name?” “Oh I’m sorry to hear that, that must hurt what a shame.”

“Someone special?” “Oh God, I don’t know where to start, yeah you know my friend Sarah, she’s got a grip on my heart.”

“Well thank you, I’m glad that means a lot coming from you, we’ve been talking about marriage women what can you do?”

“How’s your mother and father?” “Let em know I said hi.” “Divorcing I’m sorry, no please stop now don’t cry.”

“Hey I’m sorry to say it, but you know we’ve got to run, a minute in private?” Sure I guess I can spare one.”

“What is it you want, is there something that’s wrong?” “Oh you’ve got to be kidding, I’m with Sarah now I’ve moved on.”

“I couldn’t even begin to entertain that thought, I’m in love, and I’m happy, I have all that I want.”

“I know what you’re saying, yeah it sucks being alone, but be patient and open you’ll find a love of your own.”

“Look keep your chin up and smile, but babe I gotta go, baby girls giving me mean eyes, and tapping her toe.”

“Maybe I’ll see you around, you know this towns a small place, just remember be happy, keep a smile on that face.”

“And just one last thing that I’ve been wanting to say, I’m so sorry I hurt you, and that it ended that way.”

“But they say that for every ending brings the beginning again, and I got my beginning, yours will come can’t say when.”

“Goodbye…” [comments] => 1 [counter] => 284 [topic] => 24 [informant] => ItsMeNow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
Can't Say When

Contributed by ItsMeNow on Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 06:52:42 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



“Hey it’s been quite a while hello Jenn how’ve you been?” “It’s so crazy to see you, this is Sarah my friend.”

“Me?” “I’m doing great life is good can’t complain, hey I’m going to Vegas, wish me luck on the games!”

“So whatcha been up to is life treating you well?” “I’ve been meaning to call you, sorry I’ve just been busy as hell.”

“I just got a new place I’m still breaking it in, unpacking takes so damn long, I don’t know where to begin.”

“So how’s the new boyfriend, sorry what was his name?” “Oh I’m sorry to hear that, that must hurt what a shame.”

“Someone special?” “Oh God, I don’t know where to start, yeah you know my friend Sarah, she’s got a grip on my heart.”

“Well thank you, I’m glad that means a lot coming from you, we’ve been talking about marriage women what can you do?”

“How’s your mother and father?” “Let em know I said hi.” “Divorcing I’m sorry, no please stop now don’t cry.”

“Hey I’m sorry to say it, but you know we’ve got to run, a minute in private?” Sure I guess I can spare one.”

“What is it you want, is there something that’s wrong?” “Oh you’ve got to be kidding, I’m with Sarah now I’ve moved on.”

“I couldn’t even begin to entertain that thought, I’m in love, and I’m happy, I have all that I want.”

“I know what you’re saying, yeah it sucks being alone, but be patient and open you’ll find a love of your own.”

“Look keep your chin up and smile, but babe I gotta go, baby girls giving me mean eyes, and tapping her toe.”

“Maybe I’ll see you around, you know this towns a small place, just remember be happy, keep a smile on that face.”

“And just one last thing that I’ve been wanting to say, I’m so sorry I hurt you, and that it ended that way.”

“But they say that for every ending brings the beginning again, and I got my beginning, yours will come can’t say when.”

“Goodbye…”




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Re: Can't Say When (User Rating: 1 )
by SECRET0911 on Saturday, 28th February 2009 @ 03:31:22 PM AEST
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I ENJOYED HOW U HAD THIS CONVERSATION. CAN RELATE 2 THIS. KEEP UP YOUR GREAT POEMS. LOVE READING THEM!




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