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Runnin’ around trying to find my way in
There are two strong warriors who won’t let go
I’m lonely
Loneliness…….Loneliness

I’m in a dark hole all alone
With nobody to hold
Wrapped up scared and angered
of what’s going to happen
Am I in or out
Or will I find my way in.
I’m lonely
Loneliness…..Loneliness

I see the light bringing me in
Hoping I will make it in
I’m an outcast with no friends
I need somebody to talk to
But I don’t
Will I get a friend?
Or will I still me lonely?
I’m lonely
Loneliness…..Loneliness

Finally it comes to an end
I find a friend
Who will take me in
With joy and laughter I’m finally in
I’m shouting with happiness now I have a friend
Who understands, cares, and loves
I’m not lonely anymore
Loneliness…..Loneliness
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Loneliness

Contributed by Diva5 on Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 04:00:25 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I have nobody to hold by my side
Runnin’ around trying to find my way in
There are two strong warriors who won’t let go
I’m lonely
Loneliness…….Loneliness

I’m in a dark hole all alone
With nobody to hold
Wrapped up scared and angered
of what’s going to happen
Am I in or out
Or will I find my way in.
I’m lonely
Loneliness…..Loneliness

I see the light bringing me in
Hoping I will make it in
I’m an outcast with no friends
I need somebody to talk to
But I don’t
Will I get a friend?
Or will I still me lonely?
I’m lonely
Loneliness…..Loneliness

Finally it comes to an end
I find a friend
Who will take me in
With joy and laughter I’m finally in
I’m shouting with happiness now I have a friend
Who understands, cares, and loves
I’m not lonely anymore
Loneliness…..Loneliness

Copyright Â© Diva5 ... [ 2009-02-23 16:00:25]
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Re: Loneliness (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 04:13:01 PM AEST
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A very heartfelt write but you are not alone, i am only a stranger but i am willing to be your friend i hold no grudge i have fallen many times myself and am not afraid to admit my faults.

i am again but a stranger but willing to give you a ear if you need it.

Re: Loneliness (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 08:55:04 PM AEST
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I can definitely relate to the start of this poem. However even when i do find a friend, I have to leave them so I am stuck in that cycle of lonliness..

Awesome write!

Re: Loneliness (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 24th February 2009 @ 07:55:20 AM AEST
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very heartfelt write, well done.

-phil

Re: Loneliness (User Rating: 1 )
by Jlokitty on Tuesday, 24th February 2009 @ 10:16:55 PM AEST
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i can totally relate to this... great poem...
you are not alone

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