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Array ( [sid] => 148116 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Revolution [time] => 2009-02-22 15:54:19 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I dont want to live a life of strife
Serving up the devils
Who embelish hectic skepticisms
And perpetuate our perils
Learn to live and earn to give
Love is above all other levels
Earth is wise, so commercialise -
If its worth the lies
We deserve to die dishevelled

I dont quite like this democracy
A systemated Jaded instance of hypocrisy
I'd tell em to their faces, mock monopolies
Keep your damn hands off me
Not your property!
But still they seek to kill us philosophically
In a meager manner meaning less contro-versy
Gone with honesty
So astronomically,
Are the chances of us advancing..
It's cosmic comedy

So let me step forth
And make a contribution
And help strip the world
Of it's subdued delusions
The masses make movement
When the truth needs proving
And we're destitute, heading
Towards a revolution [comments] => 2 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 19 [informant] => ShaonKra [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

Revolution

Contributed by ShaonKra on Sunday, 22nd February 2009 @ 03:54:19 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

I dont want to live a life of strife
Serving up the devils
Who embelish hectic skepticisms
And perpetuate our perils
Learn to live and earn to give
Love is above all other levels
Earth is wise, so commercialise -
If its worth the lies
We deserve to die dishevelled

I dont quite like this democracy
A systemated Jaded instance of hypocrisy
I'd tell em to their faces, mock monopolies
Keep your damn hands off me
Not your property!
But still they seek to kill us philosophically
In a meager manner meaning less contro-versy
Gone with honesty
So astronomically,
Are the chances of us advancing..
It's cosmic comedy

So let me step forth
And make a contribution
And help strip the world
Of it's subdued delusions
The masses make movement
When the truth needs proving
And we're destitute, heading
Towards a revolution

Copyright © ShaonKra ... [ 2009-02-22 15:54:19]
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Re: Revolution (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 10:00:02 AM AEST
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a great satirical look on modern life. i happen to agree with your opinions. good, hard hitting work.

-phil

Re: Revolution (User Rating: 1 )
by simsalabim on Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 09:03:37 PM AEST
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sign right here

xxx

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