Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 20:33:53 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 14811 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => JUNE 12TH, 1970 [time] => 2003-03-24 00:05:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It was June 12th, 1970,
The day I became a man.
Though I was just 17 years old,
My life now had a plan.

On Valentine’s Day I proposed to you,
And asked you to share my life.
How surprised I was that day,
When you agreed to become my wife.

33 years have come and gone,
So I could write a poem like this.
And I swear to you another will come,
When we get to 66!

Happily ever after,
Only occurs in fairy tales.
But if we remember only good times,
Then ever after will not fail.

If today was just the beginning,
And I could see this far,
I still would jump in head first,
Toward the girl who owns my heart!

DEDICATED TO MY WIFE KATHIE!
robertburns2@mac.com
homepage.mac.com/robertburns2/…

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Robert_Edgar_Burns [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

JUNE 12TH, 1970

Contributed by Robert_Edgar_Burns on Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

It was June 12th, 1970,
The day I became a man.
Though I was just 17 years old,
My life now had a plan.

On Valentine’s Day I proposed to you,
And asked you to share my life.
How surprised I was that day,
When you agreed to become my wife.

33 years have come and gone,
So I could write a poem like this.
And I swear to you another will come,
When we get to 66!

Happily ever after,
Only occurs in fairy tales.
But if we remember only good times,
Then ever after will not fail.

If today was just the beginning,
And I could see this far,
I still would jump in head first,
Toward the girl who owns my heart!

DEDICATED TO MY WIFE KATHIE!
robertburns2@mac.com
homepage.mac.com/robertburns2/…

Copyright Â© Robert_Edgar_Burns ... [ 2003-03-24 00:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: JUNE 12TH, 1970 (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 01:08:09 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

ahhh beautiful! :) *toast* to many more happy years:) hugs n' love to you both, always nessa

Re: JUNE 12TH, 1970 (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 08:32:11 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Great poem! Hope your wife has read it. I am sure she will love it as much as she loves you!!

sleepless_siren

Re: JUNE 12TH, 1970 (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 09:49:42 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

AAHHH I loved this see this is what I'm talking about! Great write for your wife!
Many happy more years to come! Christina

Re: JUNE 12TH, 1970 (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 11:30:44 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

beautifully written excellent comment on lasting love.

Sharon

Re: JUNE 12TH, 1970 (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 06:28:12 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

this is so cute. i wish you guys the best of lucky. you made it this far go more. yes you do have a plane nice future being with her.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. Â©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright Â© to their submitter. All the rest Copyright Â© 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com