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I can see right through you
So turn around
And don't be surprised
By the image you see
It's the one you've created
It's the girl you now see

Disguised by the reflection you're portraying
You've masterd shuffling them in the deck of cards you're playing
Confused by the numbers you hold?
Maybe your game is starting to get old
Now check your cards once more
See I'm no longer part of the cards you unfold

To be or not to be?
Is that all you really see?
Your intricate mind full of riddles
Fails to see beyond its own solutions
Serving their only purpose
Bringing ill logic to your feeble actions
I once could see past the things you do
'Till there were more than just two

Now with still one card left in your deck
I can see a smile on your face crack
As you slowly see your last card wreck
I now can finally call the last magic act
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Deck of Cards

Contributed by Gigi_15 on Sunday, 22nd February 2009 @ 12:10:30 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Unlike the others
I can see right through you
So turn around
And don't be surprised
By the image you see
It's the one you've created
It's the girl you now see

Disguised by the reflection you're portraying
You've masterd shuffling them in the deck of cards you're playing
Confused by the numbers you hold?
Maybe your game is starting to get old
Now check your cards once more
See I'm no longer part of the cards you unfold

To be or not to be?
Is that all you really see?
Your intricate mind full of riddles
Fails to see beyond its own solutions
Serving their only purpose
Bringing ill logic to your feeble actions
I once could see past the things you do
'Till there were more than just two

Now with still one card left in your deck
I can see a smile on your face crack
As you slowly see your last card wreck
I now can finally call the last magic act

Copyright © Gigi_15 ... [ 2009-02-22 00:10:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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