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Array ( [sid] => 148036 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I won't call it love, just yet. [time] => 2009-02-18 19:26:03 [hometext] => I'm falling into your eyes, and they're luke warm. I'm holding onto your every word, so baby, hold me right back. [bodytext] => Tomorrow holds your smile,
voice, and everything I need
to get me through my day.
If I wasn't so unsure of forever
I'd promise you everything.
Every word I whisper is our secret.
So close to perfection,
I'm scared to look down for a second
and see it's not me after all.
A past doesn't fade fast,
with new faces to hold
it's hard not to second guess promises.
Luck is a theory, and love isn't true
unless the person in possession
hasn't a clue.
And I've never been more lost. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 228 [topic] => 2 [informant] => HonestInk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

I won't call it love, just yet.

Contributed by HonestInk on Wednesday, 18th February 2009 @ 07:26:03 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Tomorrow holds your smile,
voice, and everything I need
to get me through my day.
If I wasn't so unsure of forever
I'd promise you everything.
Every word I whisper is our secret.
So close to perfection,
I'm scared to look down for a second
and see it's not me after all.
A past doesn't fade fast,
with new faces to hold
it's hard not to second guess promises.
Luck is a theory, and love isn't true
unless the person in possession
hasn't a clue.
And I've never been more lost.

Copyright © HonestInk ... [ 2009-02-18 19:26:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I won't call it love, just yet. (User Rating: 1 )
by Petals_and_Tears on Thursday, 19th February 2009 @ 07:51:21 PM AEST
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*sigh* reminds me of someone
such a small world when it comes to love
if they dont have "a clue" its so much harder
but then it hurts like hell giving them a clue and being rejected

sorry i go off on tagents alot
i like ur poem
its short sweet and to the point
sometmes it doesnt take lots of words to say what you mean to say

Re: I won't call it love, just yet. (User Rating: 1 )
by Fireheart on Saturday, 28th February 2009 @ 06:09:41 PM AEST
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it's short but truly the meaning is right on it. i love the ending it was a very nice way of closing it. nicely

~* Frenchy*~

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