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Array ( [sid] => 147967 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Randomness [time] => 2009-02-15 00:44:40 [hometext] => completey random, hard to put into words wants going through my head [bodytext] => Six by six by six I cut
The feelings crashing around
The years have passed by now
Yet I have not forgot
The pain is still there
Behind the scenes
You only linger now in the distance
The alcohol just brings it all back
I have accepted what had been done
I do not have control of this life
Sometimes your memory I just cannot shake
It frustrates me to no end but yet I still walk on
Why do I compare, those other girls to you
Why can not I feel that love I had with you
Have I shielded myself to much
Or is it cause I do not want to play games
I have grown to much since when we first met
You say I was to needy and clingy
Now I’m to detached
No woman wants me
Friends do not understand
So six by six by six I cut
A release from my thoughts
Haunted by the past I locked away
Its another day, another mile I have walked
Will I ever be free, or I just to much to be
So as I am about to lay and sleep
Will your thoughts haunt me
Or can I be free
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 21 [informant] => spyndl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Randomness

Contributed by spyndl on Sunday, 15th February 2009 @ 12:44:40 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Six by six by six I cut
The feelings crashing around
The years have passed by now
Yet I have not forgot
The pain is still there
Behind the scenes
You only linger now in the distance
The alcohol just brings it all back
I have accepted what had been done
I do not have control of this life
Sometimes your memory I just cannot shake
It frustrates me to no end but yet I still walk on
Why do I compare, those other girls to you
Why can not I feel that love I had with you
Have I shielded myself to much
Or is it cause I do not want to play games
I have grown to much since when we first met
You say I was to needy and clingy
Now I’m to detached
No woman wants me
Friends do not understand
So six by six by six I cut
A release from my thoughts
Haunted by the past I locked away
Its another day, another mile I have walked
Will I ever be free, or I just to much to be
So as I am about to lay and sleep
Will your thoughts haunt me
Or can I be free




Copyright © spyndl ... [ 2009-02-15 00:44:40]
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Re: Randomness (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 15th February 2009 @ 02:07:32 AM AEST
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Awesome, write.
I can certainly relate in my past.
It seems like we never stop fighting the unknown. Looking back and time you will understand.
We fight our selves more than anything.
Or at least i DO. Keep up the awesome writing.
Huggs, blessings,
emy


Re: Randomness (User Rating: 1 )
by 3660Days on Sunday, 15th February 2009 @ 02:43:08 AM AEST
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I really like it :-D




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