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Gazing at the stars as they pass,
They follow a circular path, a journey of destiny,
Where is my hope? I am blinded to my horizon.
The Zion I search for is unreachable
How can I breath life into these lungs of mine,
burning, the warm breeze that caresses my skin,
cannot unfreeze this empty heart.
I cant help but to remember,
Everything reminds me of you
The night sky is the color of midnight blue,
And yet the mind is clouded gray by you.
The haunting of you at my side
Consumes every shadow.
Every step forward has your
Footprints in my mind.
I cannot live without someone like you.
My chest still heaves
But the heart still in this lifeless soul.
The phantom touch of your skin
scars, every moment without you….
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Devoured by love

Contributed by recyclebin on Tuesday, 10th February 2009 @ 12:36:09 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Watching seasons devoured by the click of the clock
Gazing at the stars as they pass,
They follow a circular path, a journey of destiny,
Where is my hope? I am blinded to my horizon.
The Zion I search for is unreachable
How can I breath life into these lungs of mine,
burning, the warm breeze that caresses my skin,
cannot unfreeze this empty heart.
I cant help but to remember,
Everything reminds me of you
The night sky is the color of midnight blue,
And yet the mind is clouded gray by you.
The haunting of you at my side
Consumes every shadow.
Every step forward has your
Footprints in my mind.
I cannot live without someone like you.
My chest still heaves
But the heart still in this lifeless soul.
The phantom touch of your skin
scars, every moment without you….

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Re: Devoured by love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 10th February 2009 @ 01:07:31 AM AEST
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The night sky is the color of midnight blue,
And yet the mind is clouded gray by you.

Damn, awesomely classic!!! Always something there to remind you, right? Been there. It sucks.

You really really did a great job conveying your feelings in this.
Wrought with emotion.

Take care, man!!!

Re: Devoured by love (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 10th February 2009 @ 02:15:55 AM AEST
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Ahhhhh a breath taking write my friend.
Tim stole my favorite parts lol so I will ditto that!
Entire write is awesome, touched with light strokes of sadness. That damn love word so small yet so complex isn't it?

Hugs
Michelle

Re: Devoured by love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 10th February 2009 @ 03:39:42 AM AEST
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really breath taking, i also like it very much
cheers

Re: Devoured by love (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 10th February 2009 @ 07:24:00 PM AEST
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I here ya friend.
I took 8 years off after my last husband Just to figure things out 'cause I was making the same mistakes over-n-over.
Verbal abuse is hard to get thru. They beat you down so bad you never wonna try again.
Well I finally can let go of the past and have a solid relationship in the now.
Whatever it takes luv yourself. This is importent. It's really nice to have a relationship that builds me up and not even think of tearing me down.
Hang in there my dear friend, joy cometh in the morning.
Big huggs, big luv, awesome blessings,
emy

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