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I''d talk forever just to see you smile
I want to know which one is the rite path
To your heart, no matter how many miles
I love you from the bottom of my heart
Although you are in love with someone else
It hurts me deeply whenever we part
Cause that person has you all to themself
Your being is the essence of beauty
Although I only wish you the very best
I only hope that one day you''ll love me
So that I may one day be the luckiest
It kills me knowing you''ll never be mine
But as long as you''re happy, that''s just fine.
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Unrequited Love

Contributed by Jer_Bear on Monday, 9th February 2009 @ 12:28:50 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



If every word I said, could make you laugh
I''d talk forever just to see you smile
I want to know which one is the rite path
To your heart, no matter how many miles
I love you from the bottom of my heart
Although you are in love with someone else
It hurts me deeply whenever we part
Cause that person has you all to themself
Your being is the essence of beauty
Although I only wish you the very best
I only hope that one day you''ll love me
So that I may one day be the luckiest
It kills me knowing you''ll never be mine
But as long as you''re happy, that''s just fine.




Copyright © Jer_Bear ... [ 2009-02-09 00:28:50]
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Re: Unrequited Love (User Rating: 1 )
by kismetkills on Monday, 9th February 2009 @ 01:10:11 AM AEST
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it's a really beautiful poem (as i've told you before), but i hope you cheer up jeremy and remember there's more fish in the sea, more monkeys in the jungle, more cows in the pasture, more pep in pepsi max. ;p
keep up the writing.


Re: Unrequited Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th February 2009 @ 02:55:38 AM AEST
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Yes really good written poem.... I like it very much...
cheers


Re: Unrequited Love (User Rating: 1 )
by zenith66 on Monday, 9th February 2009 @ 06:41:44 AM AEST
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very touching and althoug teh subject of love is hard to write originally about., i feel what you lacked in originallity(which is not always a bad thing) you made up for it wit the beautifull honesty you displayed in your heart warming words, i feel that pain. i know that pain adn its one of the worst you can feel, you did the right thing to let her go, to be happy, all you can do is be strong and look to the future, because its bright my freind, very bright!!!


Re: Unrequited Love (User Rating: 1 )
by xaviera on Monday, 9th February 2009 @ 08:11:44 AM AEST
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Your poem is very touching, it shows how much you love her...


Re: Unrequited Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th February 2009 @ 11:11:28 AM AEST
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a very compassionate write. it flowed beautifully. great work.

-phil


Re: Unrequited Love (User Rating: 1 )
by PreciousKitten on Monday, 9th February 2009 @ 11:31:56 AM AEST
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a good poem. sure you're not happy, at least someone knows that you want them to be happy.


Re: Unrequited Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Crookedpoet09 on Monday, 9th February 2009 @ 02:05:07 PM AEST
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It's a very simple, straight-to-the-point poem which is why I admire it. You've done a good job at describing your feelings in an easy manner. Good work!


Re: Unrequited Love (User Rating: 1 )
by 3660Days on Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 03:24:37 PM AEST
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That has an excellent rhythem to it, very nice. I look forward to seeing more from you, Jer-Bear. :-P




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