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Array ( [sid] => 147848 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => two Hold! nothing? at all (and a question to the rest) [time] => 2009-02-08 03:48:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You wonder with words i see the light that hides within
marking places and times no longer spent
questioning day that have dried up and went
followed by knowing the root of it all
we know nothing thats the guilt of the fall
this is a place were we all begin
nothing to solve nothing to win

so we seek again this dark corner we always meet with greedy looks in the eyes
a sense of wonder a chance of something new a man with out fear but to much to do
i have seen hidden puzzles in the sand walking the world with only one plan
to dried i have spent all i have longing for truth and a swift upper hand

jumped in to the quiet of my day
longing to hold but that thoughts fading away
i sense you torn understanding i face
like a curse to you world and the curse i will twirl
i my past is with everything i say
there is nothing to hold nothing at all [comments] => 1 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 43 [informant] => lostrelic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
two Hold! nothing? at all (and a question to the rest)

Contributed by lostrelic on Sunday, 8th February 2009 @ 03:48:20 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



You wonder with words i see the light that hides within
marking places and times no longer spent
questioning day that have dried up and went
followed by knowing the root of it all
we know nothing thats the guilt of the fall
this is a place were we all begin
nothing to solve nothing to win

so we seek again this dark corner we always meet with greedy looks in the eyes
a sense of wonder a chance of something new a man with out fear but to much to do
i have seen hidden puzzles in the sand walking the world with only one plan
to dried i have spent all i have longing for truth and a swift upper hand

jumped in to the quiet of my day
longing to hold but that thoughts fading away
i sense you torn understanding i face
like a curse to you world and the curse i will twirl
i my past is with everything i say
there is nothing to hold nothing at all




Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2009-02-08 03:48:20]
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Re: two Hold! nothing? at all (and a question to the rest) (User Rating: 1 )
by simsalabim on Sunday, 8th February 2009 @ 05:07:45 AM AEST
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got blown away huh? heh 2 to bad





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