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Array ( [sid] => 147842 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Beer [time] => 2009-02-07 19:35:12 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Beer is such a backstabber.
Your night with her starts out
innocent enough.
She seems really fun, introduces
you to everyone. She doesn’t mind
if you try to get with other girls. In fact,
she helps hook you up.
You and Beer really just hit it off.
But Beer’s problem
is that the morning after
she just won’t leave. She turns into such a
b*tch. She nags you,
giving you a nasty headache. Sometimes
she stays all day,
like you don’t have anything better to do.
You decide
that you and Beer are finished. You’re
breaking it off.
But you always end up coming back to Beer,
and she always takes you back because
she really is pretty amazing,
isn’t she?
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Beer

Contributed by chris1189 on Saturday, 7th February 2009 @ 07:35:12 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Beer is such a backstabber.
Your night with her starts out
innocent enough.
She seems really fun, introduces
you to everyone. She doesn’t mind
if you try to get with other girls. In fact,
she helps hook you up.
You and Beer really just hit it off.
But Beer’s problem
is that the morning after
she just won’t leave. She turns into such a
b*tch. She nags you,
giving you a nasty headache. Sometimes
she stays all day,
like you don’t have anything better to do.
You decide
that you and Beer are finished. You’re
breaking it off.
But you always end up coming back to Beer,
and she always takes you back because
she really is pretty amazing,
isn’t she?

Copyright Â© chris1189 ... [ 2009-02-07 19:35:12]
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Re: Beer (User Rating: 1 )
by Mars on Saturday, 7th February 2009 @ 10:34:24 PM AEST
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I've never been much of a drinker, but I really like the way you compared beer to the woman in the poem. I know a few people in my life that are like this =). Short and to the point, and I like how you finnished it with a question; highlighting the comparison between the two. Well thought out... probably one of the best that I will review today, I do enjoy poems like this. Keep writing =P.

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