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Array ( [sid] => 147832 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Crow like Fate [time] => 2009-02-06 21:00:17 [hometext] => In Baghdad, it is the season of the crows......A dark sonnet.....feeling a little down but still always hopeful.... [bodytext] => The crow like fate waits for its indulgence
Hapless soul left for dying in the sun
Suffering lost love’s strongest allurance
Can what has passed be truly undone?

Ants come like time, taking portions away
Little by little, the rigor will fade
Robust life falls ashen and grey
Without you become an unwoven brocade

From that day to this no loss as with this
Corporal offering that others may live
Memories of that final last kiss
Naught left but thoughts to only relive

The crow does summon, its caw harkens fate
Forgiveness and love, it’s never too late

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Crow like Fate

Contributed by navydocny on Friday, 6th February 2009 @ 09:00:17 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The crow like fate waits for its indulgence
Hapless soul left for dying in the sun
Suffering lost love’s strongest allurance
Can what has passed be truly undone?

Ants come like time, taking portions away
Little by little, the rigor will fade
Robust life falls ashen and grey
Without you become an unwoven brocade

From that day to this no loss as with this
Corporal offering that others may live
Memories of that final last kiss
Naught left but thoughts to only relive

The crow does summon, its caw harkens fate
Forgiveness and love, it’s never too late

Copyright Â© navydocny ... [ 2009-02-06 21:00:17]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Crow like Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 6th February 2009 @ 09:38:07 PM AEST
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Beautiful write, though a bit sad.
Be safe over there my friend. Miss ya

Hugs
Michelle

Re: Crow like Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by ammar on Saturday, 7th February 2009 @ 07:35:25 AM AEST
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Yes, quite beautiful witha a remarkable flow.

Keep writing

ammar

Re: Crow like Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 7th February 2009 @ 05:26:32 PM AEST
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a most moving write, im not a fan of crows, so i hope some happier birds now grace your days, be safe,

love n' hugs nessa

Re: Crow like Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by Mars on Saturday, 7th February 2009 @ 11:10:38 PM AEST
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Yes, sad... isn't it? The political figures don't have to go into battle themselves... and if they did... this would be a much more peaceful world. Keep writing =).

Re: Crow like Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 7th February 2009 @ 11:34:52 PM AEST
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Hello dear, dear friend,
I don't like crows either.
I feel so honered to have you share your time there.
You are definently a strong and brave man.
stay safe, huggs, luv, blessings,
emy
May your joy be filled to the brim.
I know it has to be hard witnesing such travastry over there.

Re: Crow like Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by Recyclebin on Tuesday, 10th February 2009 @ 12:46:59 AM AEST
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Very good write..of course couldnt expect anything else but good from you my friend.

~Bin~

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