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Array ( [sid] => 147809 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => aidless with AIDS [time] => 2009-02-05 14:29:11 [hometext] => im HIV positive (fate screwed me) this may be my last poem sorry [bodytext] => surging through my blood
i tells ya its not good
fate has its final joke
and god it pulled a good one
they've given me 20 years
but atleast now i can live without fear i suppose
tainted bllod flows in my veins
yet i am calm i have no pains
i no longer ponder to the end
but the future i can spend
fate is'nt cruel
and well ive a good run
and now and then a pun
a romance or two
no longer shall i waste what have left
fate has given me a reason to live by killing me
not a second shall i waste
nothing i shan't taste
smell
feel
or live
im free now
thank you fate
why should i be sad
if anything i should be glad
to the end my readers
use your potential
live
write a poem
maybe in my memory
live a love
do the unimaginable
for me
do the things i can no longer do
for me
LIVE

so thank you all for your support and well goodbye and even though i know not your names your souls have inspired me and lets hope we will meet beyond the abyss c ya on the other side readers Bye

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aidless with AIDS

Contributed by fortunesdancer on Thursday, 5th February 2009 @ 02:29:11 PM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

surging through my blood
i tells ya its not good
fate has its final joke
and god it pulled a good one
they've given me 20 years
but atleast now i can live without fear i suppose
tainted bllod flows in my veins
yet i am calm i have no pains
i no longer ponder to the end
but the future i can spend
fate is'nt cruel
and well ive a good run
and now and then a pun
a romance or two
no longer shall i waste what have left
fate has given me a reason to live by killing me
not a second shall i waste
nothing i shan't taste
smell
feel
or live
im free now
thank you fate
why should i be sad
if anything i should be glad
to the end my readers
use your potential
live
write a poem
maybe in my memory
live a love
do the unimaginable
for me
do the things i can no longer do
for me
LIVE

so thank you all for your support and well goodbye and even though i know not your names your souls have inspired me and lets hope we will meet beyond the abyss c ya on the other side readers Bye

Copyright © fortunesdancer ... [ 2009-02-05 14:29:11]
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Re: aidless with AIDS (User Rating: 1 )
by desireemiote on Friday, 6th February 2009 @ 12:12:21 PM AEST
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it's good that you are looking at it both ways but HIV and full blown AIDS are 2 different things. I'm sorry to hear that you have HIV but don't let that make you feel hopeless. 20 years is not a full life unless you are already 60 but as you said you've been given the guts to make it a full life now. Enjoy it.

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