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Array ( [sid] => 147635 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => HEARTLESS [time] => 2009-01-26 00:29:34 [hometext] => MISSCARRIGES ARE HELL AND EVEN WORSE WHEN DADDY DOESN'T CARE [bodytext] => THE DAYS HAVE BEEN SO LONG
AND THE NIGHTS HAVE BEEN COLD
SINCE YOU BROKE MY HEART IN TWO
YOU TOLD ME THINGS AND MADE ME LOVE YOU
THEN ONE NIGHT ALL YOU WANTED WAS FRIENDS
AND YOUR LOVE ENDED AS SOON AS IT BEGAN
IF IT EVER REALLY DID.
IN OUR SHORT LOVE SPAN WE CREATED LIFE
AND MONTH LATER YOU WERE WITH HER
AND i WAS ALL ALONE CARRYING A CHILD ALONE
KNOWING i WOULD DO IT ALL COMPLETELY ON MY OWN
MY HEART HAS BEEN SHATTERED AND I'M LOST
ONE DAY I WOKE UP AND IT WAS ALL FADING AWAY
THE PAIN WAS SO BAD AND ALL I COULD DO IS PRAY
WITHIN HOURS I WAS TAKEN TO THE HOSPITAL,
KNOWING YOUR CHILD INSIDE OF ME.................................DIED
LAYING THERE ALL THOSE HOURS WITH OUT
EVEN YOU TO TELL ME IT WOULD BE ALRIGHT
AND ALL I WANTED TO DO WAS CRY FOR YOU AND ME
CRIED FOR WHAT WE LOST BUT IN THE END ITS PLAIN TO SEE
THAT YOU REALLY DIDN'T CARE AND i LOST IT ALL...
ALL REALIZED IN A HEARTLESS PHONE CALL
NOW YOU SAY IT WASN'T YOUR CHILD
AND MAYBE IT NEVER EXISTED...
HOW CAN YOU NOT CARE AT ALL
HOW CAN YOU BE LIKE THAT
WHEN I'M LEFT IN A HEARTLESS SHELL
WELL THATS FINE
JUST GO TOHELL [comments] => 2 [counter] => 257 [topic] => 48 [informant] => brokenwings [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
HEARTLESS

Contributed by brokenwings on Monday, 26th January 2009 @ 12:29:34 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



THE DAYS HAVE BEEN SO LONG
AND THE NIGHTS HAVE BEEN COLD
SINCE YOU BROKE MY HEART IN TWO
YOU TOLD ME THINGS AND MADE ME LOVE YOU
THEN ONE NIGHT ALL YOU WANTED WAS FRIENDS
AND YOUR LOVE ENDED AS SOON AS IT BEGAN
IF IT EVER REALLY DID.
IN OUR SHORT LOVE SPAN WE CREATED LIFE
AND MONTH LATER YOU WERE WITH HER
AND i WAS ALL ALONE CARRYING A CHILD ALONE
KNOWING i WOULD DO IT ALL COMPLETELY ON MY OWN
MY HEART HAS BEEN SHATTERED AND I'M LOST
ONE DAY I WOKE UP AND IT WAS ALL FADING AWAY
THE PAIN WAS SO BAD AND ALL I COULD DO IS PRAY
WITHIN HOURS I WAS TAKEN TO THE HOSPITAL,
KNOWING YOUR CHILD INSIDE OF ME.................................DIED
LAYING THERE ALL THOSE HOURS WITH OUT
EVEN YOU TO TELL ME IT WOULD BE ALRIGHT
AND ALL I WANTED TO DO WAS CRY FOR YOU AND ME
CRIED FOR WHAT WE LOST BUT IN THE END ITS PLAIN TO SEE
THAT YOU REALLY DIDN'T CARE AND i LOST IT ALL...
ALL REALIZED IN A HEARTLESS PHONE CALL
NOW YOU SAY IT WASN'T YOUR CHILD
AND MAYBE IT NEVER EXISTED...
HOW CAN YOU NOT CARE AT ALL
HOW CAN YOU BE LIKE THAT
WHEN I'M LEFT IN A HEARTLESS SHELL
WELL THATS FINE
JUST GO TOHELL




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Re: HEARTLESS (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 26th January 2009 @ 12:52:13 AM AEST
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You go girl!
I give you a ten for this awesome write.
I'm so sorry for your loss. I lost twins in my younger years and My Dr. put it to me like this, "She said it's just natures way taking care of things 'cause there was probably something seriously wrong with the baby. Either way I know how you feel about your loss.
Take care and keep writing like this and you'll get far.
Huggs, luv, blessings, inner peace,
emy


Re: HEARTLESS (User Rating: 1 )
by HaleysHeresat on Monday, 26th January 2009 @ 01:51:30 AM AEST
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I just cried. That is terrible... the situation, not the poem.




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