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Array ( [sid] => 147620 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => RainBow Walking [time] => 2009-01-25 13:15:45 [hometext] => [bodytext] => f I walk to the end of my rainbow
will there be a pot of gold?

Will rainbow travel be worth
the hassle?

If I succeed
then suppose
I find that I am not as worthy
as other Rainbow Walkers?

If I am not
I'll be exposed
as fraudulent.

If I walk to the end of my rainbow
while I be happy?
Or just as sad
as I now am?

How do I know that Rainbow Walking
is worth it all?

My uncle used to say
that 'having dreams that you
or the world will be different at the
end of the rainbow
has a flaw.

After walking and succeeding
you'll still be there.

Rainbows don't glow
if you don't.'

Never understood
what he was talking about
till later on.

Now I really really like
the Rainbow in me
and no matter where I walk
it's aways there
and I realize
I am
my own
pot of gold. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 43 [informant] => lnnie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

RainBow Walking

Contributed by lnnie on Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 01:15:45 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

f I walk to the end of my rainbow
will there be a pot of gold?

Will rainbow travel be worth
the hassle?

If I succeed
then suppose
I find that I am not as worthy
as other Rainbow Walkers?

If I am not
I'll be exposed
as fraudulent.

If I walk to the end of my rainbow
while I be happy?
Or just as sad
as I now am?

How do I know that Rainbow Walking
is worth it all?

My uncle used to say
that 'having dreams that you
or the world will be different at the
end of the rainbow
has a flaw.

After walking and succeeding
you'll still be there.

Rainbows don't glow
if you don't.'

Never understood
what he was talking about
till later on.

Now I really really like
the Rainbow in me
and no matter where I walk
it's aways there
and I realize
I am
my own
pot of gold.

Copyright © lnnie ... [ 2009-01-25 13:15:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: RainBow Walking (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 01:39:55 PM AEST
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no matter where you go, there you are. . .
travel light, smile long, love on. . . peace. elle

Re: RainBow Walking (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 03:08:20 PM AEST
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a heartwarming, beautiful write.

-phil

Re: RainBow Walking (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 11:24:25 PM AEST
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I've been to the end of the rainbow.
To touch the rainbow it looks like diferent colors of gold dust. There is your gold.
It's really an exciting moment.
Awesome writing,
emy

Re: RainBow Walking (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 4th February 2009 @ 05:46:11 PM AEST
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An awesome write... I love the ending... very positive..
Jenni

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