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Too little to move at all
Not a room, its way too small
So silent, as if to be a tomb

I reach in my pocket, I needed light
I find my lighter and pull it out
Lit a flam and looked about
And found to my shock and to my fright

I lay on a soft bed around me, finished wood
How could it be I wonder
Could I be six feet under
No. theres no way I could

With no luck I pushed the casket door
Raised my foot an busted trough
Dirt fell in, my god its true
Im buried my life to be no more

Push through the dirt, dig my way up
Not an easy task at all
Cant move in a space so small
But I manage to find my way up

Fresh air at last
Covered in sweat I looked around
No other graves here to be found
I pull out of the hole fast

I red the tombstone behind me
"Here lies the wolf at last
His wicked life has finally past"
I seek my revenge now that im free [comments] => 5 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 13 [informant] => nightwolf [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

buried alive

Contributed by nightwolf on Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 12:20:18 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I awoke in a small dark room
Too little to move at all
Not a room, its way too small
So silent, as if to be a tomb

I reach in my pocket, I needed light
I find my lighter and pull it out
Lit a flam and looked about
And found to my shock and to my fright

I lay on a soft bed around me, finished wood
How could it be I wonder
Could I be six feet under
No. theres no way I could

With no luck I pushed the casket door
Raised my foot an busted trough
Dirt fell in, my god its true
Im buried my life to be no more

Push through the dirt, dig my way up
Not an easy task at all
Cant move in a space so small
But I manage to find my way up

Fresh air at last
Covered in sweat I looked around
No other graves here to be found
I pull out of the hole fast

I red the tombstone behind me
"Here lies the wolf at last
His wicked life has finally past"
I seek my revenge now that im free

Copyright © nightwolf ... [ 2009-01-25 12:20:18]
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Re: buried alive (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 02:11:14 PM AEST
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i liked this write. the imagery was good and vivid and the ending was great.

-phil

Re: buried alive (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 09:19:55 PM AEST
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Oh my heck this had me on the edge of my seat.
I loved it!

Michelle

Re: buried alive (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 11:42:59 PM AEST
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Wwwwwwoooo, Hope this is just really good writing.
Awesome.
huggs, blessings,
emy

Re: buried alive (User Rating: 1 )
by kismetkills on Thursday, 5th February 2009 @ 01:01:42 AM AEST
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creepy, it reminds me of the movie Kill Bill in a way, especially with revenge mentioned at the end.

Re: buried alive (User Rating: 1 )
by nightwolf on Wednesday, 11th February 2009 @ 05:29:10 AM AEST
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if you liked this one, be on the look out for part two.

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